Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Pantoum

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My Love

My love you may call me day and night 
Because I think of you anyway, all day long 
I cannot live without you day or night 
And in this I don't see anything wrong 

Because I think of you anyway all day long 
You may want to call me any time you want 
And in this I don't see anything wrong 
Living without your love I can't 

You may want to call me any time you want 
Do it night and day all the time 
Living without your love I can't 
And into eternity we can sing and with love rhyme 

Do it night and day all the time 
I cannot live without you day or night 
And into eternity we can sing and with love rhyme 
My love you may call me day and night. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014


November,14,2014

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Gary Bateman November 19, 2014 at 8:11 AM A most beautiful and quite enchanting Pantoum "D." A eternity of something like this is truly glorious!! A "7" and a FAV!! Best Always and Spill Ink -- Of Course . . . Gary Dorian Petersen Potter November 23, 2014 at 2:19 AM Hi Gary! Thank you so much for stopping by and all my dear friend. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Paul Callus November 17, 2014 at 9:11 AM Lovely and romantic pantoum, Dorian! Looks like this is eternal love! // paul Dorian Petersen Potter November 17, 2014 at 9:48 AM yes that it is, Paul my dear friend thank you so kindly for all! :) xxxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 16, 2014 at 7:13 AM A great love poem D. You are fabulous in this genre. Much appreciated. Love XXXXX rajat Dorian Petersen Potter November 16, 2014 at 8:12 PM Thank you Rajat my dear friend! Your sweet comments are much appreciated. :) Love and Light! xxx D.

David Meade November 15, 2014 at 8:13 PM If your love does not call you -- I will -- day or night! Loved the poem. Dorian Petersen Potter November 16, 2014 at 8:14 PM Thank you so much David dear friend. Youre very kind! :) Love and light! xxx D.