My Love

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My love you may call me day and night Because I think of you anyway, all day long I cannot live without you day or night And in this I don't see anything wrong Because I think of you anyway all day long You may want to call me any time you want And in this I don't see anything wrong Living without your love I can't You may want to call me any time you want Do it night and day all the time Living without your love I can't And into eternity we can sing and with love rhyme Do it night and day all the time I cannot live without you day or night And into eternity we can sing and with love rhyme My love you may call me day and night. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,14,2014

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/19/2014 8:11:00 AM

A most beautiful and quite enchanting Pantoum "D." A eternity of something like this is truly glorious!! A "7" and a FAV!! Best Always and Spill Ink -- Of Course . . . Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 2:19:00 AM

Hi Gary! Thank you so much for stopping by and all my dear friend. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/17/2014 9:11:00 AM

Lovely and romantic pantoum, Dorian! Looks like this is eternal love! // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/17/2014 9:48:00 AM

yes that it is, Paul my dear friend thank you so kindly for all! :) xxxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/16/2014 7:13:00 AM

A great love poem D. You are fabulous in this genre. Much appreciated. Love XXXXX rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/16/2014 8:12:00 PM

Thank you Rajat my dear friend! Your sweet comments are much appreciated. :) Love and Light! xxx D.

David Meade

Date: 11/15/2014 8:13:00 PM

If your love does not call you -- I will -- day or night! Loved the poem.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/16/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thank you so much David dear friend. Youre very kind! :) Love and light! xxx D.