Atish Yadav Poet Light Verse

My Love

A beautiful girl with the world's cutest smile 
entered in my life to love me for a while... 
Her honesty her simplicity 
forces me to copy her style 
I wanna walk with her a distance 
longer than longest river Nile...  

Her cuteness her dumbness 
make love her more and more... 
I will never forget her in my whole life 
that I guarantee for sure... 

a girl who is different from others 
want to love me more by opening her feathers... 
her non violence nature will not change 
in any of the weathers...  

Her coolness her slowness 
although a moody behavior... 
inspite of all these qualities 
she will never face failure... 

Her move and her action 
her dressing sense her graceful gesture... 
each and everything in her 
makes me feel that I found a precious treasure... 

God has gifted me all the happiness 
in this small span of time... 
By loving her so much 
I dont think I made a crime... 

I dont know how long we will be together 
but I promise you dear 
I will love you so much in this small time 
that you will not miss your grandfather... 
 
It is not important to be together for whole life  
its important to love each other more than 
a real husband and wife... 

I love you like hell 
you are the diamond in the sky... 
Promise me dear 
when you will go away from me 
You will not use the word goodbye...

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Paul Callus March 17, 2014 at 9:57 AM How very romantic! She must really be something special :) // paul

Poet Destroyer A March 17, 2014 at 12:37 AM Very deep, Atish, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A March 16, 2014 at 2:30 PM Atish, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Atish Yadav March 16, 2014 at 10:24 PM hello skat

Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2014 at 1:53 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Atish :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)