My Love

Shouts ring hollow on hallowed walls.
Where once she dwelt and bled and died.
Love hangs mute as worn words recall.
There did our love swell as the tide.

Where once she dwelt and bled and died.
Where angel wings fold round our bed.
There did our love swell as the tide,
with tenderness our true vows said.

Where angel wings fold round our bed,
lights of heaven shine from within.
With tenderness our true vows said,
each promise made, in truth therein.

Lights of heaven shine from within.
I glow with pride each thought of her,
each promise made, in truth therein.
Strong feelings deep within me stir.
 
I glow with pride each thought of her.
Love hangs mute as worn words recall.
Strong feelings deep within me stir.
Shouts ring hollow on hallowed walls.
	    ~//~

© 21 Nov 2010 Charles Henderson
    Place 4 th Paula's Pantoum contest

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Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:29 AM
Many congrats Charles on winning coveted spot in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
Radke Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Very beautiful poetry. Thank you for writing this wonderful tribute to love. Congratulations on your win in the pantoum contest.
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:26 AM
So glad to see your wonderful entry in the winners' circle, Charles. Congratulations! Love and blessings for the holidays, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 7:19 AM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in Paula's Pantoum contest with this vibrant write and win.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:31 AM
ahhhhhh Charlie so romantic..good win yes but I'd like at least 4 more lines ;) [Now the contest is over you can add?]Congrad's on your WIN! Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of paula, Charles
Johnson Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Looks Great Charles... thank you for your kind comment... I'm a bit slow on the different types of verse:) Seems every second line rhymes ...pantoum Don
Mehta Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Hello Charles, I could not find sestina Please give once over to the entry,
Devonshire Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Oh, I think this is wonderful, Charles! Great use of the pantoum form to express you love for your wife. I think this will do well in the contest! Wishing you success always. I'll check my Soup Mail now. Love and blessings for a terrific Thanksgiving, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 8:35 AM
A nice recollection of memories you have penned. Charles, you have wrongly entered the form Sestina instead of Pantoum
Giovannelli Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 2:26 AM
uhaoo,i feel short
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November 20, 2010 at 11:53 PM
Unclear what this is about. Please don't explain it, fix it.
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