My Love

On the mountain tops will I scream her name,
A choir of birds will I give her praise to sing,
I will let the winds carry far her fame,
Her beauty will I compare to the daffodils in spring,
My love, dark as chocolate, yet lovely.
Her hair, long and silky like fine cords in Solomon’s temple,
Her smell, irresistible like a garden of roses in Sicily,
Oh, her voice, smooth like running waters o’er a pebble,
In her eyes live the brightest stars,
Her smile defeats a million radars,
The chambers of her heart are made of pure gold,
And out of it great treasures unfold.

Her love is my song that never stops playing,
Her love is my river that never stops flowing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 7, 2016 at 2:52 AM
Michael jenkin, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv ""Skat""
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November 15, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Michael in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol
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November 14, 2010 at 8:29 AM
A beautiful poem, Micheal. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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November 11, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Congrats, Mike. Excellent entry. Nice going. Ralph
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November 10, 2010 at 11:28 PM
Micheal...congrats on well deserved win ......... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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November 10, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, michael
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November 9, 2010 at 5:38 PM
Michael Congratulations on your poem's honored place with the top ten. Agape, Moses
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November 9, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Michael! Love, Audrey
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November 9, 2010 at 3:59 PM
Congrats Michael on your success in my One in a Million contest with this beautiful entry so well written and expressed.. enjoy .. and thankxxx for supporting my contest with luv..
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September 24, 2010 at 7:39 AM
lovely, congrats on your win in the contest
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September 23, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Many congratulations Micheal on your win in Catie's lovely contest >> James
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September 23, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations Michael for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
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September 22, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Just beautiful, micheal and so lyrical . Congrats on your great win. Luv, Andrea
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September 22, 2010 at 8:24 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Love Scarlett
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September 22, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Congrad's on your win in this contest! Nice to see a new name in the winners circle! Light & Love
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September 22, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest. micheal
Sweetheart Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Congrats Michael on your big win in the Love Notes contest... a wonderful write and win ..to enjoy with luv...
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September 22, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Great poem Michael. Reads like a psalm. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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September 15, 2010 at 9:36 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Michael. Love, Carol
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September 14, 2010 at 4:51 PM
A lovely piece Michael in a beautiful form as well.. hope u entered it in Catie's newest contest Love Notes... might have a great chance to win luv.. good luck...
Roberts Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 1:31 PM
nice one, good luck in the contest if it was written for that
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