My Love

On the mountain tops will I scream her name,
A choir of birds will I give her praise to sing,
I will let the winds carry far her fame,
Her beauty will I compare to the daffodils in spring,
My love, dark as chocolate, yet lovely.
Her hair, long and silky like fine cords in Solomon’s temple,
Her smell, irresistible like a garden of roses in Sicily,
Oh, her voice, smooth like running waters o’er a pebble,
In her eyes live the brightest stars,
Her smile defeats a million radars,
The chambers of her heart are made of pure gold,
And out of it great treasures unfold.

Her love is my song that never stops playing,
Her love is my river that never stops flowing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/7/2016 2:52:00 AM
Michael jenkin, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv ""Skat""
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Michael in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:29:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Micheal. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2010 11:15:00 AM
Congrats, Mike. Excellent entry. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:28:00 PM
Micheal...congrats on well deserved win ......... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, michael
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:38:00 PM
Michael Congratulations on your poem's honored place with the top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Michael! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:59:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your success in my One in a Million contest with this beautiful entry so well written and expressed.. enjoy .. and thankxxx for supporting my contest with luv..
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:39:00 AM
lovely, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:54:00 AM
Many congratulations Micheal on your win in Catie's lovely contest >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations Michael for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:53:00 PM
Just beautiful, micheal and so lyrical . Congrats on your great win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:31:00 PM
Congrad's on your win in this contest! Nice to see a new name in the winners circle! Light & Love
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest. micheal
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your big win in the Love Notes contest... a wonderful write and win ..to enjoy with luv...
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:41:00 PM
Great poem Michael. Reads like a psalm. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/15/2010 9:36:00 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2010 4:51:00 PM
A lovely piece Michael in a beautiful form as well.. hope u entered it in Catie's newest contest Love Notes... might have a great chance to win luv.. good luck...
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Date: 9/14/2010 1:31:00 PM
nice one, good luck in the contest if it was written for that
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