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My Love

When I think of you, my darling, I am still that wide-eyed girl Who held the whole world in her hands As her heart was set awhirl. With no thought nor intuition Of how short a life can be, We promised "Until by death we part" With a sweet expectancy. God gave us such a little time To wrap up every dream. The plans we made were not to be All included in His scheme. It's not my place to question God, I knew from the very start, But I cannot help but wonder why Our world was torn apart. You'll be the same, my darling boy When we are allowed to meet, But you won't find remembered girl Who had made your life complete. It has been another lifetime since You had to leave me here. My hair has grayed, my step has slowed, My eyes are not so clear. Yes, the years have surely changed me Since the day we had to part. To be sure you recognize me, I'll be carrying my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/30/2011 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:51:00 PM
In love with the last stanza Joyce. Beautiful love story. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:04:00 PM
JOYCE,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:38:00 AM
It feels like another lifetime since I lost my beloved too, Joyce. So beautifully penned! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:56:00 AM
Ahhh, now I have found my #1 ;) and the soul will seek the essence of his soul and you will become one with all...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:10:00 AM
Joyce this a wondeful write of love....
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:38:00 PM
Dear Joyce, Thank you for supporting my contest with this beautiful poem. Congratulations. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on your well deserved third place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 12/30/2009 12:50:00 PM
You ended this exquisitely, joyce, and guess what I am CAUGHT up with you now (although I will never be caught up as long as we both shall write!) I cannot believe how many hours I've been down here. Gotta get me some lunch!! bye now, Andrea
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Date: 12/13/2009 5:01:00 PM
Great poem and so bittersweet. A wonderful tribute to love
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Date: 11/29/2009 2:29:00 PM
Lovely poem Joyce. Thanks for your comments. Pam
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:01:00 AM
Have a beautiful day and thank you for posting your fantastic poetry here for us to read Joyce. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:11:00 AM
This is heart touching, and beautifully written, Joyce! Brought tears to my eyes. Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/29/2009 3:34:00 AM
Sad but filled with descriptiveness of young love and emotion. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2009 9:17:00 PM
Joyce, let me brush a tear away, magnificent writing, full of love and lost love and pain. I know this pain, so well, as my love is also waiting on the other side. I write about him all the time, he is in my every thought and will be until my days are gone, my one and only true love, and I think you feel the same...
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Date: 11/28/2009 7:47:00 PM
A beautiful poem and I enjoyed reading it..Marty
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Date: 11/28/2009 2:40:00 PM
You've done it again Joyce. So very beautifully too. Loved it . -Robert
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Date: 11/28/2009 2:14:00 PM
aw, sounds awful sad, yet full of love
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