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My love

Waiting for the whole night to see his first sight Hearts were beating It sounds like lighting He's my everything

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Date: 7/2/2025 1:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Sumaiya Hawsdeen
Date: 7/2/2025 3:10:00 AM
Your words resonated with me, and I'm glad my poem touched your heart. Thank you for being part of Poetry Soup and for sharing your kind spirit.

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