My love

Waiting for the whole night
 to see his first sight
 Hearts were beating
 It sounds like lighting
He's my everything
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 1:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Hawsdeen Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 3:10 AM
Your words resonated with me, and I'm glad my poem touched your heart. Thank you for being part of Poetry Soup and for sharing your kind spirit.
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