My Love

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Written on September 14, 2023 (Terza Rima Sonnet)

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Waking to your touch, I feel so blessed, such bliss This is wonderful that I once dreamed about Nothing feels quite as perfect as your sweet kiss Because I know you’re mine, I will never doubt This is love so alive, it feels earthshaking Awesome love so fine, knowing I won’t burnout These feelings, like fine art, are just breathtaking Nothing on earth feels as much like gentle grace Where you are, that is where my smile is waking Thanks to you, I know joy that pain can’t erase You give me more love than my words can describe There is gentle I can’t explain on your face I haven’t a doubt, you’re what my heart did prescribe When I found you, there’s love the soul does inscribe

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Silent One

Date: 9/15/2023 1:38:00 PM

An interesting form which you have done very well.. a beautiful poem..

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/14/2023 6:36:00 PM

This is indeed a beautiful write Regina. You have expressed what true love means. Thank you for sharing this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2023 11:49:00 AM

Wonderful. And I loved the line about a gentle on his face

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/14/2023 10:44:00 AM

this is a difficult form to master and you did it with such ease and beauty Regina, God bless your lovely heart :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2023 5:40:00 AM

A pretty piece. ;0)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2023 4:14:00 AM

So very beautiful! Much enjoyed the romantic vibes of love you convey, Gina.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/14/2023 3:22:00 AM

Amazing terza rima, i love your rhymes and the love you’ve expressed here is soul warming and beautiful. Gorgeous flow of words too, stay blessed always :)