My Love

The radiant glimmer of mine
A golden lustre you shine.

You have painted my soul with your tint
Every place you touch is an invisible print.

Even in darkness, we glance
With a blind tune, we dance.

You can call me by your name
We are two sides of twin fire flame.

To your song, now I rise
Because love is paradise. 

You have shown me eternity is true 
My darling, I love you. 




7th March 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Sara
Ayantika Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:14 PM
Thanks Sara
Rolland Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:06 PM
this is a very sweet declaration, loved the rhymes yann
Ayantika Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Thanks so much
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 5:53 PM
This might be a good entry for Regina's contest: For You, Love Poetry Contest, Akanksha. It's lovely :)
Ayantika Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 9:04 PM
Thank you! I'll check it out
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