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My Lost World

My Lost World Wait... I can go no further My "time" is no longer mine My "heart" is no longer mine My "mind" is no longer mine The sun never rises in my lost world There was a time and a place Where I was whole and had a face My existence was recognized Once a real person…on the road to life Now a person on the long road to hell Lost between worlds time and space Not in my "time" Not in my "heart" But in my "mind" I can be free It all starts with me

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Date: 2/17/2020 12:27:00 PM
Hello Patricia LeDuc,I welcome you to Poetry Soup. Yes this poem is beautifully done. We all have our ups and down in life.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2020 6:16:00 PM
This is a great idea Patrica. Enjoy your evening my friend.Your friend Darlene.
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 2/20/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I write from many experiences that I have had...real life :)
Date: 1/13/2018 2:27:00 PM
Patricia, you have the gift of poetry. This poem tells me you not only think but feel the world around you. Write more please.
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 1/19/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Carlos..I appreciate your kind words of encouragement that have allowed me to feel welcome here..Patty

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