My Lost World

My Lost World Wait... I can go no further My "time" is no longer mine My "heart" is no longer mine My "mind" is no longer mine The sun never rises in my lost world There was a time and a place Where I was whole and had a face My existence was recognized Once a real person…on the road to life Now a person on the long road to hell Lost between worlds time and space Not in my "time" Not in my "heart" But in my "mind" I can be free It all starts with me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Hello Patricia LeDuc,I welcome you to Poetry Soup. Yes this poem is beautifully done. We all have our ups and down in life.Have a nice day my friend.
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February 20, 2020 at 6:16 PM
This is a great idea Patrica. Enjoy your evening my friend.Your friend Darlene.
Leduc Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Thank you for your comment. I write from many experiences that I have had...real life :)
Blanca Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Patricia, you have the gift of poetry. This poem tells me you not only think but feel the world around you. Write more please.
Leduc Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Carlos..I appreciate your kind words of encouragement that have allowed me to feel welcome here..Patty
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