My Lost Valentine

Today, I sleep with a thorn pricked in my heart,
Tomorrow I'd wake up with the same pain as before.
As I closed my eyes, I dream of you;
Kissing me to wake up and accept the truth.
And in the middle of the night I awoke sadly,
My heart bleeds like stabbed by a thousand daggers
Then I tell myself, "If this is what losing love means,
I'd rather sleep forever, bleed and be found dead."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sabido Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Thanks Robert. I really appreciate it!;)
Pettit Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 8:57 PM
Nice wording in this entry. It is very descriptive and a good presentation for Valentine's Day.
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