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July 22nd 2023

My Lost Doll- Ld

I had a lovely little doll got at the tender age of seven.
It was made of fine plastic, with twinkling eyes and golden hair.
At a time when my generation had not heard of Barbie dolls,
My uncle living abroad had gifted it which I held as most dear.

More than anything I treasured it, and my friends envied me.
They always rallied round just to see and hold it in their hands.
I carried it wherever I went and always slept clutching it.
With its possession, to my parents, I made no more demands.

She looked so pretty in flitting blue eyes and ponytail.
Though lifeless and a mere toy, she was my all.
We were always together, so inseparable.
But as time skipped, she no more held me in thrall.

I slowly got over my obsession with toys and trinkets.
My bond with the doll grew thinner, I had diverse engagements.
I no more cared for my doll; it lay neglected in some dusty corner.
Seasons rolled and years speeded by, and life took new alignments.

I knew the annual clean-up of my house was long overdue.
Moving the trash, I saw my old doll in a junk box made of plywood.
The very sight of it brought a surge of sweeping emotions in me
Dusting it, I locked it up in my cabinet, a sweet reminder of my childhood!
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Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Sweet, sweet, sweet Valsa - congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 11:05 AM
A sweet childhood reminder! I’ve always loved Barbie dolls. Would have loved to collect them. I’m not one for storing toys away. If there is a kid around I am apt to let them play. Congratulations, Valsa!
Alex Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 8:47 AM
A very memorable experience. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Sweet memories indeed, as Vijay said. I had a bunch of troll dolls and I guess my mom threw them away. I could find them nowhere back at our old house.
Pandit Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Sweet memories of childhood well conveyed, Valsa. Keepsake treasures!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 10:17 PM
Memories are made of this, dear Valsa. I of course prefer soccer or football. A lovely poem.
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