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My Loneliness

As lonely as a gravestone Inscribed with a name That time has long forgot Hidden away under the undergrowth Where my bones are left to rot. As empty as a river now dry That once used to flow My life has no longer no direction My heart no home to go. As frightened as an unwanted kitten Thrown into a sack Crying out in the darkness For it's Mother to come back. The clock ticks away And I die a little more everyday Who cares if I live or die There's no one their to hear my cries Anyway. Peter Dome.Copyright.2015.June.

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Date: 6/26/2015 6:36:00 PM
Peter, this is a sad piece.If these are your true feelings, let me say I care and so does several of your other soup friends.I also concur with Anne- Lise. Choose to be happy and let it overwhelm your heart. Take care my soup friend:) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 6/29/2015 7:24:00 AM
Choosing happiness is not easy at all. However when sadness chooses you, you still have a choice to happy even though its hard :) Alexis
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Peter Dome
Date: 6/29/2015 1:52:00 AM
Hi Alexis. thank you so much for your kind words. you have always been a rower of strength and support to me, and I can't thank you enough. I had a date last week,. but she wasn't the one for me. A beautiful girl, but because of her being separated from her husband, I didn't want to get involved. it's a shame. thank you for your advice and goodwill. my best wishes. Pete.
Date: 6/26/2015 3:01:00 PM
- A really sad write Peter !!! - It's Friday, the sun is shining ..... be happy !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/29/2015 1:58:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise. thank you so much for your upbeat comment.had a date Friday but she's not the one, but a beautiful person. must keep on with my quest to find my maiden ha ha. Any offers welcome. best wishes as always. Pete..

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