My Living Breathing Poem

“I’m reading your poems, Mama”
She wrote while we were chatting online today
I was thrilled
What could give me more joy
Than to have my 19 year old 
My only child, the light of my life
Read my work?

Then she typed…….
“I read it, Mama
The poem you wrote about Daddy, 
 ‘He comes looking for me’
It’s so pretty, Mama….I cried”

A warm feeling came over me
Joy…..
Yes, joy!!!
Joy that my words had moved Shereen
Or...or was it because she loved her daddy so much?

“He didn't blink an eyelid when I told him,” I grumbled.
“I know, Mama!
He isn't emotional
Be patient with him, be patient.”

I smiled
How she loved and defended him
He had just returned from Cyprus
Where he had spent several days with her
I could not go
My teaching schedule always clashing
With our plans to be together as a family
Not emotional?
If she could only understand

He had cried on his way to the airport
My husband...
The man who never cries
Who doesn't show his feelings…
He cried remembering their goodbye

After having given her a last hug
Right outside her small rented flat
He was surprised to find her on the street
She had rushed down after him
And there she was
Flagging down
The borrowed car he was driving

Waiting…wanting
One more hug from Daddy
The big college girl
Living away from home
In her own little studio apartment
There she was 
Standing in the cold
Wanting yet one more hug....
From her daddy
He cried
She cried

How she loves him
This man whose genes 
Seem to have dominated over mine
In creating this living beauty...
Her curly hair
Her complexion
Her height
Her beautiful shapely body
It seems that she got everything from him

But wait…..then again
She got my heart
My love of music 
My depth of emotions
The luxuriant thickness of her hair
YES! I MUST and WILL take credit for that
She inherited my love for writing
She already has a poem published

My little girl
My 19 year old baby
Who reads my work
And sheds tears
She is my living breathing poem
The best of who I am
And what I have to offer
The best of my love
My greatest accomplishment
My daughter….
Shereen Natalie Ghali
My legacy to the world

Eileen Manassian Ghali


PS......if you want an idea of Shereen's writing ability, then look up the poem she wrote for me on my birthday...It's entitled...The Month of May- My Daughter's Tribute.
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Jones Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 7:41 PM
She loves you both very much....that's certain....wonderful joyful family sweetie...home filled with love....Hugs....MD
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 2:56 PM
- Very similar to her mother - beautiful. - Have a nice weekend Eileen! // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Thanks, sweet Anne-Lise!!! You are always a ray of Sunshine in my life!
Sergi Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 9:54 AM
a beautiful dedication a wonderful story of life and family
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:55 PM
Thanks ever so much, Joseph. Nice to have a visit from you!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 9:19 AM
I enjoyed reading all the comments..
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Richard......I love you visiting and reading all the comments! :) Have a GREAT weekend, my dear. Hugs
Hendricks Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 7:22 AM
What a beautiful dedication to your daughter - and to her father. She certainly is a sweet girl and lives up to her name. Moreover, she inherited your inner beauty. Don't we love it when our daughter's are younger replicas of ourselves? My daughter and I are also very much alike but she's my worst and most honest critic!! Enjoy her all you may before she moves on, my friend. A warm hug to make the separation a bit easier. Licia :-)
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:58 PM
I know I'm a silly silly goose, but I DO get jealous when she goes to her Daddy.....I'm like, "Girl.....I went through labor for YOU! It was tough work! He just had fun contributing his bit!" ;) She is very careful and always makes sure she gives me my share of love too! I do think she's Daddy's girl, though. Oh well, I'll take what I can get! Yes, my daughter will critique my singing, my writing, my clothes. The honest truth! Glad you are close to your daughter, sweetie. Love you for visiting an posting! <3
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 5:09 PM
- Her words make you happy, a beloved child. - Away from the mother and father .... missed much. - Big love from the father, mother and daughter - it shows in their own way - A beautiful poem dear Eileen. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Thanks for this sweet endearing post, Anne Lise.....We will be reunited soon! Can't wait!!!!! Recently she's been missing us...I know because she is posting loving comments on my pics on Facebook. She posted..."My two favorite people in the world," on a pic of her dad and me. She wants to come home! Have a fab weekend, gorgeous!
A   Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:56 PM
WOW! Eileen, this one is amazing... Is your daughter on this site.. If so please point her out... One more time... WOW... The Legacy... I love the last ending thought as my own to my daughter... Hugs my friend... LINDA
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:02 PM
LINDA......love having you here, cutie pie! :) I know how close you are to your daughter. They are such treasures! Yes, I always make sure I tell her that if I never accomplish anything else in my lifetime...bringing her to this world is my greatest accomplishment! HUGS!!!!! XO
Carroll Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:10 PM
Hi Eileen, Wonderful tribute poem full of love.. Ken
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:03 PM
:) Thanks, Ken....we are very attached to our daughter!!! She is the light of our lives...the glue of this family! :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 1:53 PM
mother and daughter-- two emotions colliding near or far... so refreshing amd lovely, eileen... i need oxygen!..:) huggs
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:04 PM
YES!!! Thank you, sweet Nette! Thank you for always being so gracious with me! THANK YOU!
Makama Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 12:03 PM
very interesting. I enjoyed it.
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Thanks ever so much, Funom! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Great work honoring your daughter and husband as well..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:06 PM
Thanks, sweet Sara! :) Glad you liked this poem!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 7:54 AM
I just love this one from beginning to end. I like the thought of a child being a living breathing poem. This is a very special piece, I am sure it will be passed down from generation to generation.
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:06 PM
:) :) :) :) :) From beginning to end :) :) :) :) your comments bring smiles!
Tacito Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 7:50 AM
I can only imagine the rush you felt when this happened. What an insatiable vibe! This is the power of family...
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:08 PM
Yes, Drake..........exactly as you described it. My daughter....is a sweetie pie. She knows me so well. She helped me pick out the poems I was going to read for your show.....No matter how down I feel about how I look...she always tells me I'm beautiful! How precious is that??? Hugs
Mohammed Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Gorgeous poetry Eileen. I'm glad I read this one.
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:09 PM
It's been a while, Mustapha...Thanks for the visit! :)
Richards Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 9:40 PM
How gorgeous is the love that explodes for your daughter! I know the feeling so well......and once when my own daughter read something of mine, and tears welled up.....it was the best moment ever as a poet to share that one quiet moment with her. Lovely poem, Eileen !
Manassian Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 3:53 AM
Carrie...thanks for the lovely visit and your kind words. I know it seems crazy, but one reason I didn't want to have any more children is that I didn't want to share my mother's love with others. I wanted to Shereen to get the full love, attention, and support that she deserves. At times parents play favorites, and it is so damaging to the children's psyche. I'm so happy your daughter connects to your work..and why shouldn't she. You are an amazing writer! :)
Seal Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 8:44 PM
You're a lucky lady to have a beautiful and talented daughter, and writes like this are your second legacy, that to the world of poetry. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 3:55 AM
Yes, I am blessed and fortunate, Richard. In many ways, she is stronger and more....dare I say...mature than I am! I know....shame on me, but it's true. She often calls me on things, gives me advice, gives me that "look" when she thinks I'm out of line in some conversation....She is amazing! I raised her up as a friend. Thanks for your kind words about my work, Richard. It means so much.
Bauer Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 6:23 PM
oh eileen, this is so beautiful! i love the idea of your daughter being your "living breathing poem" - that's pure magic!
Manassian Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 3:58 AM
:) Ilene. So good to "see" and "hear" from you. You are a source of just and encouragement. Magic.....yes. I miss her a great deal as she is away at University, but she is close by and gets to come home on holidays. Looking forward to Christmas! :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 5:32 PM
wow, your poem is AWESOME. the title makes a lot of sense too after reading this one. I am happy for you. My daughter is working on a novel but sadly, she does not seem interested in my writing and I just don't know why. I remember reading her stuff when she was in high school and being so proud of her!She is a good woman with three kids now. Just dont' understand why she won't relate to me with my poems.
Manassian Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I'm not trying to offer solace or anything, but your writing is absolutely superb. Flawless in its beauty. If your daughter can't see or appreciate that, it is probably because she has some other issue going on. Perhaps she feels she needs to prove herself, do something different that her gifted MAMA, and thus the novel is being born. Don't worry, sweetie. One day...she will confess that she thinks you're an awesome write, for that you ARE!
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Eileen , before I read your poem, i have a link for the Lola song by the Kinks: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ixqbc7X2NQY I hope you will watch it and pay attention to the lyrics. you may be surprised!!! Not the lola you were thinking of!! But i loved that song by Barry Manilow too.
Manassian Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:00 AM
I checked it out! Awesome....I'm so so silly! Thanks for sharing, my dear....Again....lovely poem!
J.T. Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Very heartfelt and sweet. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of literature.
Manassian Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 3:47 PM
Justice........You are so so kind! :) Piece of literature has me flying.......Thanks ever so much!
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