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My Little Town--- Simon and Garfunkel Tribute

My little town is surrounded with green. The sound of silence shines through the trees' windows. Our grass grows higher than a trampoline. Moss patterns bring laughter between streets' shadows. The sound of silence shines through the trees' windows. A most peculiar man stops to listen. Moss patterns bring laughter between streets' shadows. Smiling silently, his green eyes glisten. A most peculiar man stops to listen to voices of old peoples' fresh perspective. Smiling silently, his green eyes glisten because the leaves that are green are reflective to voices of old peoples' fresh perspective. If I am a rock, then I am a jade because the leaves that are green are reflective. A great effect is kept secret in shade. If I am a rock then I am a jade. Our grass grows higher than a trampoline. A greater effect is kept secret in shade. My little town is surrounded with green. Written 4-13-18 10, 11 syllable pattern Songs by Simon And Garfunkel: My Little Town The Sound of Silence Patterns A Most Peculiar Man Voices Of Old People The Leaves That Are Green I Am A Rock A Great Effect

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Date: 5/27/2018 4:40:00 PM
I enjoyed the creative and beautiful imagery in your pantoum, Juliet. 'If I am a rock then I am a jade' - simply stunning! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/27/2018 4:16:00 PM
Awesome creative verse, Juliet, congratulations on your Pantoum win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/25/2018 6:34:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Juliet..a well crafted Pantoum.
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the music pentoum contest. Well done! :)
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:34:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 3rd place in the contest, a great music choice Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2018 12:36:00 PM
One of my favourite duo, great choice.. you did the pantoum very well, but i thought you could have used more of their songs... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/24/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thank you and thanks for the inspiration. I might play around with a song title theme again in the future.
Date: 4/21/2018 7:53:00 PM
Nicely done Juliet...best wishes
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Date: 4/14/2018 4:56:00 PM
I like this. Great theme. Can't go wrong with Simon and Garfunkel.
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Date: 4/14/2018 7:41:00 AM
Nice! :)
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