"my Lips To You"

Kneeling down behind,

       my lips lower to your neck
               
                    and find the softness
                             
                                 that arouses my senses

                                                 till my thoughts take over you..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Michael, you are a romanticccccerrrr... wow...pd
Anto Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Thank you for your kind comment re my 1st poem... love the passion in your write. I have written a similar one and will post soon.
Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Wow! I think I am speechless Mr. Falotico.. Beautiful passionate Tanka you got here.. :) luv Wilma
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