My Lilith

Lilith came to me in a dream
she said Eden was beautiful
we fell through the abyss
the fury of our flight
kindled the air...

It thundered and lightninged
below us the ocean boiled
birds of prey gathered
she said we were to marry
the mark of Cain upon me...

She kissed with venom on her lips
with roses across her chest
I was in love
like an addict
loves his addiction...

"You may do with me as you like," she said
you have been in bed with whores before
you are free to do as you will
since you like doing it
more than you like what you do...

Summon the dark priest drenched in sin
for my harlot shackled in death
whoredom that plays like an orchestra
as she enticed me to shout
the shrill scream of ******...

The lightning and thunder ceased
she disappeared behind dark mountains
between sky and land
the dusk and dawn
wearing her crown of jagged stars...

She slit the throat of the horizon
as I fell back
into my Merlin sleep
I heard a siren's voice say,
"I am Lilith and you are mine-forever!"
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:51 AM
.... wooooowW, Ken !!!! - You surprised me with this, well done !!! - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 2:51 PM
if we are honest, we all have a dark secret place in our hearts where we are vulnerable to evil, to our own selfish desires, to the deep dark night. . . we hear the seductive calling of Lilith. Your poem gives voice this real evil . . . but yet hope stills clings. Nicely done Ken
Carroll Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Thank you David for stopping by!
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Different kind of work..Not my likings but there is a culture out there who love this kind of material now..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Carroll Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Apologies that this dark write doesn't meet your expectations Sara. To me poetry is more than just, sunshine, lolly pops and rainbows..Thanks for the visit!
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 11:46 PM
my goodness, what an imaginative story. I am reminded of the show that just went off the air forever: True Blood and the Lilith plot!! REally great stuff.
Carroll Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 10:28 PM
WOW! What a captivating story, Ken. It is dark and somber....and screams of other world scenes...Interesting piece. I've heard of Lilith, but...I don't believe in her. Still, It makes for a lovely read. Hugs
Carroll Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Always appreciated Eileen!
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