Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

My Light Home

A staircase to light..
                                                       A guide to lead us all home..
                                                               After days away..
              
                                                            A set of eyes watch..
                                                       Its glow cascades for miles..
                                                       When I'm lost, there's you..


written for "In the Light of Haiku"
By Michael J Falotico

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 13, 2011 at 11:52 AM CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON A SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY POETRY LUV.. AMAZING AS U ..XOXO..YOUR J.G. IN CATCH UP MODE..OH...

Barbara Gorelick September 12, 2011 at 6:34 PM Great spin on the theme...congrats .,BG

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 3:51 PM hey Michael congrats on your superb win my friend..David

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 3:31 PM Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Michael. Love,Carol

Russell Sivey September 12, 2011 at 3:04 PM Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!

Dinda Minardi September 10, 2011 at 1:02 PM Lighthouse and her eyes, greatly written! Both present about true guidance. xoxo, dinda.

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2011 at 11:21 PM I love the way you romantacized it, Michael. wonderful entry to the contest. I am just not "feeling" it for this contest. But I am seeing many good ones. Thanks so much for my win in YOUR contest.that one I really felt.

Constance La France September 9, 2011 at 9:35 PM Very nice Michael, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for my 9th placement in your contest, I am very honored and proud~~

Carrie Richards September 9, 2011 at 8:37 PM You have made it beautifully personal. Lovely poem. Many thanks, Michael, for my 3rd in your recent contest....I am honored! Thank you!

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2011 at 7:25 PM Romance but about a lighthouse such a great metaphor..Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..May your gift expand over the years to come and touch on the lives of many in a positive way..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2011 at 6:24 PM OH SUCH BEAUTY SHOULD BE ENCASED IN A TREASURE TROVE MICHAEL LUV.. TRUE ESSENCE OF THE LIGHTHOUSE AS IT'S GLOW CASCADES FOR MILES ..GOOD LUCK IN THIS CONTEST... MY WHITE KNIGHT.. AND.. SO HONORED U CHOSE MY ENTRY FOR FIRST PLACE AS IT WAS TRULY WRITTEN FROM THE HEART AND A LIVING EXPERIENCE TODAY LUV.. AM HONORED AND HUMBLED THAT U ENJOYED THE LINES.. YOUR JERSEY GIRL WISHING U BE SAFE WITH NEW TERROR THREAT TO NYC.. THINKING OF U ALWAYS LUV... XO