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My Light

nothing has shone ever since you have gone I sit and moan my heart is torn thank heavens today you are coming back to keep me happy you know the knack your squeals n laughter the house did lack of naughtiness and fun you are such a pack everything without you is dim I've turned grim with you I fool around and no need for a gym for glow on my face you are the sim I'm now waiting to hold you and hug and kiss for long I have waited for this this time you all I really did miss next I hope there will be no separation ,I wish .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/17/2017 7:22:00 AM
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Date: 7/15/2017 12:08:00 PM
I like how there seems to be a natural flow to the phrases even though they do not have the same length. It is a nice little poem full of emotion. Great job!
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