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for Sotto Poet's Pen To Quote 2 Poetry Contest

My life Into an Unimagined Future

“The future is an unimagined landscape” – Thomas S. Monson

I look back at my yesterdays -
my childhood anxieties, yet oh, there also were
so many simple glories and delights.

Summers were ice cream days and firefly nights.
Fall was back-to-school and trick-or-treat anticipation.
Winter brought snow escapades and Yultide fun.

Before my adulthood had begun,
no concept of my future did I have beyond my dreams:
pure fantasy – naive romantic notions.

There are no magic potions.
Life overtook me; I’ve learned that the future for myself
as I had pictured it was not to be.

Where I’ve ended up, I do not see
fireflies. Christmas wonder too has disappeared,
along with the thrill of Halloween.

Decades since my age of sweet sixteen,
I find myself with trials entirely unforeseen.
There is also good, and still I am alive.

There are certain ways in which I thrive.
My family, hobbies, and poetry sustain me now although
years in my profession have turned to dust.

Onto new horizons I am thrust.
Technology, strange health issues, and perilous world conditions
have formed a landscape unimagined in my youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Guptar Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations, dear poetess, on your win in this contest on such a vivid depiction of what one dreams of in life and what the landscape has in store for us. Wishing you a blessed day
Famuyiwa Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 10:22 PM
Nice recaling those childhood memories so beautifully and congrats on your winning placement.
Hind Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 7:27 PM
Appreciate your memoirs and perspective <3 may your coming days be rewarding
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 4:59 PM
What beautiful childhood memories, I love picturing your days in snapshots which you have so well-articulated. Mor futures do present a stark contrast from childhood dreams, life is not a bowl of cherries without the pits, unfortunately. Your honesty in this write is sad truth, and I hope you are doing well. Everything is different for the adult than our hopes once dreamed. Hugs to you sweet friend, prayers for joy and health to you and yours. Hugs to you <3
Narain Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 11:09 AM
Sometimes the young age dreams don't come true. Still we all survive with new goals.
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 4:31 PM
A candid write raw and honest. Thought provoking and engaging! I had no ideas for this contest. You do a great job creating varied new writings with your versatile style! Great job!
Hawley Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 8:47 PM
I do get that parts of life are unimaginable in youth. For example, I never imagined my current job. I can relate to this poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 1:13 PM
I enjoyed reading. Guess youth is wasted on the young. I am staying 25. Hahaha!!! "Good Luck"  Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away.........
Roper Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Your past yesterdays seem like innocent fun experiences for a child growing up. It’s funny how the holidays and other meanings change as our future moves forward, even our physical body. Enjoyed reading a little of yourself.
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Yes. When we are small, all the people over 50 seem so old. Then we hit 50. And it's 70 +. Now I'm 70 and 80 is not looking so bad
George Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:35 AM
In youth, we had glossy dreams, some actualized and some unaccomplished. But in our waning years, life becomes more of a burden and lands us in unanticipated realms. It is true for most of us. Be prepared to accept what may come. A heartfelt and sincere appraisal of life. All the Best in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:45 AM
For sure!
Kerr Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 11:17 PM
You have written a lyrical poem of great depth, Andrea. It has so many philosophical high points extending over a life time. Thank you for reading and commenting on Brazen Outside Lodgers Howard
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Thanks, Howard
Williams Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:23 PM
I appreciate your interesting and candid take on your life, Andrea - its highs and lows, treats and trials, and so on. Thank you for sharing some of the themes and edges of your life. Best wishes in Sotto Poet's contest! Bartholomew
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Thanks so much
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Deep write and enjoyed read! I like it :-)
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Thanks, Abdullah
Rolland Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 4:02 PM
who knows his destiny ? life has ups ad downs, lovely reading and inspiration, thanks poet
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Thanks, Yann
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