My Life As a Car

My Life as a Car

Rusted and busted see my orange face
Used to grace the showroom place
See these broken eyelights that shone so bright
They saved your life one darkened night
Edsel body, wet shell to forget
Dear little voices asked “Are we there yet?”
And still my memories are mildew clear
Now through the busted fenders to yesteryear
Down the road we'd go far and wide
By rolling hills of still countryside
Uria finally got his license one day
So, in the back seat, he and Neat did lay
Taking lunch on a hunch by the road
Early moving morn and those three trunk loads
Days soon came with the clanks, clinks and pings
Can’t start, what’s wrong?  everything
As grass grows up under my lowly gears
Road memories are crystal clear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/3/2018 8:55:00 PM
Very sweet, Janis. Well penned. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 4/14/2017 7:59:00 PM
Who could have talked of a rusty car unimaginable.nice work of personification. Kindly review my works also as I've just joined.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/18/2017 6:55:00 PM
You'd be surprise what contests have you writing.
Date: 6/27/2016 3:35:00 PM
a sad tale of the junked car! that was a very clever line where you said "mildew clear!"
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/28/2016 12:15:00 AM
Thank......
Date: 6/25/2016 10:19:00 PM
This is excellent, Janis! Loved it :) Good luck in the contest:)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/25/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thanks, Laura. My first acrostic...
Date: 6/25/2016 7:15:00 PM
Great Acrostic and personification of the memories and final fate of the poor old car! Nicely done, Janis, and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/25/2016 10:32:00 PM
Hug-u-bac Sandra. As you may not know, this is my first try at an acrostic so I need all the wishes...Thanks
Date: 6/25/2016 5:55:00 PM
I think these old cars would have many a tale to tell if they could only talk Janis! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2016 10:32:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.....
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