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My Life

You came into my life as a stranger who became a friend. Playing hide and seek and other games. Making me believe you would not hurt me. That's just what you did. You took away my smile and my voice. While ripping the innocence out from underneath me, A little girls hands tremble in fear. I Lay there motionless trying to speak but no one heard my cries. This is what you took from me, MY LIFE!
I’ve been told this person cares dearly, So mom why is it that I all I heard was nasty things from you. Taking a back seat to endless nights of drinking and drugs, now wasn’t that fun! The day the phone rang I was surrounded by family and friends, When you told me it was the end. That your new life meant more to you then I did. Don’t think I forgot about that phone call! As I stood there that night my life flashed before my eyes. This is what you took from me, MY LIFE.
My father once told me I would never be part of his family, For I did not carry his last name Mad at me because he never had the control he wanted over me As I tried to build our relationship. I am starting to see we are very different indeed. You were never there for me, Your insulting jokes my whole life and your jealousy. I have had enough of. You have taking my spirit and my self confidence has dwindled from all this. I am standing up and taking back MY LIFE!
Cory long

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/2/2011 12:41:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 11:49:00 PM
Wonderful job Cory! I'm glad you got the recognition you deserved partner:) Proud of you:D
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Date: 6/1/2011 11:52:00 AM
Cory a stunning piece filled with emotion and will power!! Congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;)
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Date: 6/1/2011 11:50:00 AM
Congrats Cory on your first place win in pd's contest with this very touching piece..gautami
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:02:00 AM
Many congrats, Cory : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:01:00 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Cory. Excellent. Great job. Ralph
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:13:00 AM
Congfgratulations on the first place win in the contest. I am so happy to see you on the top, cory
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:49:00 PM
Cory~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:25:00 PM
WoW Cory! What a very strong and emotional piece-- I literally felt chills here! Super congrats on your win and kudos to you for taking back your life!
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:20:00 PM
Congrats cory on your first place win in this cool contest.. awesome luv..
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:24:00 PM
Heartfelt writing and intense. Congratulations, Cory. YOu did AWESOME
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Date: 5/8/2011 11:41:00 AM
The greatest hit poem Huh' Well this struck a cord with me and thanks for your comment, also if you have a special prayer say one for Carolyn she needs some Ok? Remember this site is for all of us and she is in need of the Father right now, God bless
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Date: 4/25/2011 11:51:00 PM
Very powerful. I echo the sentiments in that I hope this is a story. God Bless. R.M.
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:23:00 PM
Sweetie I do hope these are only poetic thoughts not the story of your life. That would be too sad. Love, Joyce
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