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quote:"We're born alone, we live alone, we die alone. Only through our love and friendship can we create the illusion for the moment that we're not alone. Orson Welles" until then i bade goodbye left family with wet eyes new realm to study in USA hopes were high in all our hearts Until then time was fleeting months passed fast becoming years finally after long time got warm hugs from family finally I meet a girl got married I had to leave after long six long months wait saw her happy face again she went to see her parents felt home sick living alone there she died of heart attack hoping to unite our souls

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Date: 11/13/2024 12:08:00 PM
Jay, congrats on your win in my contest, like your quote, like your poem, well done, blessings Constance
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Date: 10/20/2024 7:13:00 AM
I have read your work and am delighted to see it on the winner's list. Sad one. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 10/17/2024 10:49:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write/story again. Have a wonderful day with your win......................
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Date: 10/9/2024 1:01:00 PM
What a wonderful yet sad write/story. Great Quote.... Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:33:00 AM
Oh Jay l am so sorry it ended that way….a heart touching write! Debx
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Date: 10/4/2024 5:24:00 PM
So sad how you lost the girl. Good quote you put with it.
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Date: 10/4/2024 12:06:00 PM
Oh, it's terrible to end this way. It scares me to think of life incomplete. I am sorry that you were not close by.
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Date: 10/4/2024 11:16:00 AM
Oh my, this is such an emotive poem... Carefully describing the journey of many hearts which traverse through the obligations and responsibilities of life, in search of love, then realising the ultimate truths... You've so poignantly described one's life and that tragic ending really creates an ache in the soul. What are we without love and without those precious moments lived with our loved ones, I wonder... A solemn jueju, impeccably done! - Regards ~
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Date: 10/4/2024 10:16:00 AM
Nicely done
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