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My Life

My life is a failure Every time I try to rise up I fall down My life is a failure I dream of things Which I hope to achieve But as I age It seems to rise higher As my life descends lower My life is a failure The more I try the harder it gets My life is a failure No stop I am not a failure I am a success I am what was made of me I am what I dream to be I am what I make of myself I am Lorenzo Carty - Lorenzo L. Carty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/19/2009 3:03:00 PM
I really like the twist in this piece. This is all mind over matter one would guess. We are capable of being who and what we are, or have dreamt to become. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/6/2009 8:06:00 AM
read some of my poems there reallly gud!!!!!
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Date: 5/6/2009 8:05:00 AM
GOOD POEM KEEP UP DA WORL LIL RENZO
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