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My Lazy Day

It's my day off
Can I sleep longer
My body agree
My mind disagree 
My body needs to rest
My mind scream many things needs be done
But I don't want to get up 
Oh yes your room is a mess
But who cares
You do you lazy Smurf 
Oh but it's my day off
So what
So I don't have to do anything I don't want to
Ugh, who do you think you are
Me the one who's body is tired and need some lazy day in bed
Where do you think you at on Guam
No but I wish right now
Your lazy smurf don't have days off in NY 
I just don't care right about now
Oh ok if you say so
Yes I say so and I'm gonna call it
... My lazy day...
Oh but you have so much to do
Nope I'm not listening 
Oh but you need to go get coffee
Nope I don't drink coffee
What about for lunch and dinner
I'll eat PBJ for lunch and soup for dinner
Ugh I gave up but you're gonna pay for it
Yey it's about time you persistent mind
Now let's both relax and read some of the great poems on PoetrySoup
Yes I'd love that all day long my lazy day... Smile!

          Akkina R Downing
                12-27-16

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/23/2017 8:00:00 PM this was very fun to read. It's from a year ago! About this same time of the year. ARE you still having lazy days now? Do you know the Lazy song by Bruno Mars? Check it out if you don't . it's so cute. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 12/23/2017 8:35:00 PM It just so happen that I have too much cramps today so it became my lazy day again... Lol! Laying in bed most of the day. Thank you much Drea :) hugs and smiles :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/10/2017 2:55:00 PM Very nice piece Akkina!:) A 7! The best to you in 2017! And thanks a lot for visiting my pages today:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:) D. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 2/10/2017 3:59:00 PM Thank you so much Dorian, you're so sweet and I appreciate your comment... God bless you too and have a wonderful weekend. Hugs :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 12/31/2016 11:59:00 PM Beautiful, just as your smile! Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 1/1/2017 3:08:00 AM Awe thank you Arhur :) Happy new year

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/30/2016 2:35:00 PM - Delicious with lazy days .... sometimes :) - Lovely poem, Akkina :) - Happy New Year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 12/30/2016 6:04:00 PM Thank you so much and happy new year to you too Anne-Lise :) Akkina Downing Date: 12/30/2016 4:17:00 PM

Daniel Turner Date: 12/29/2016 11:05:00 PM Decisions! Decisions! I would have went to Central Park:) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 12/30/2016 5:01:00 AM Hahaha... Yeah :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon Date: 12/27/2016 4:15:00 PM When your heart disagrees with your body and vice versa, a winner emerges in the end. Lovely and humourous. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 12/27/2016 4:45:00 PM Thank you Adeniji for your visit and comment, I appreciate it very much :)

Paul Callus Date: 12/27/2016 12:52:00 PM A most pleasant and entertaining poem, Akkina! So pleased that eventually you reached a relaxing compromise:) You're definitely not a bank smurf....but I love smurfs who live in mushroom houses:) Regards // paul Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 12/27/2016 12:58:00 PM I'm so happy you think so Paul, thanks very much :)

Tim Smith Date: 12/27/2016 11:02:00 AM I wish for those lazy days at times too...trying to clean from the holidays still. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 12/27/2016 11:32:00 AM I just let it go today. Let everything wait for me until I feel like touch them later.. Lol!

Chris Green Date: 12/27/2016 9:34:00 AM This was great Akkina, a poetic argument with your self but it seems the perfect solution was agreed upon in the end. :) I truly know how this feels. Nicely done my friend. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 12/27/2016 9:41:00 AM Hehe.. Thank you Chris, yes finally. Lol!