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My Last Poem

The silence is broken With the crunching of rocks Beneath my feet while I Carry a glass of tea, Pen, and leather journal To the picnic table Under the gazebo; Providing shade from the Bright sunlight streaming down, Laced with English ivy, Light scented jasmine pearls, A place I go to sit Read, write, and meditate. I reach and touch leaves and Delicate bright colored Petals of my garden. Absolute peace lives here In silence of my home. The sounds of birds carried By the breeze of birds that Refuse to be ignored. There was a time, a long, Long time passed, I believed In forever blessed you And I would stay the same. I think of tomorrow And if it will arrive? Do I have enough time To fill the pages with Enthralled memories When you were in my life? I asked you, time and time Again to write all your Memories, so they would Keep on. Now it's up to Me to remember the Few whispers of your life A life that was not mine. 7/17/2020

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Date: 7/28/2020 11:19:00 AM
A really touching muse from your pen Eve. Each verse dives deeper into the ocean of tender emotions than the previous one. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/27/2020 3:13:00 AM
A touching poem you wrote--a heartfelt memory that will live forever--BIG congrats on your first place win, Eve.
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Date: 7/27/2020 2:18:00 AM
Ah, this one is a winner, for it changes the colors of my heart as I read it. The only person who came to mind strongly as I read it, was your dear Roper, then I got a shiver, I think his story is your story, love you dear girl, congrats on your win, you will always have a place in my heart . Stay healthy, xo
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Date: 7/27/2020 1:17:00 AM
Depth, Eve, never dark or deep but; a lovely multi-layered sincere depth of colours, imagery, scents and heartfelt emotions, glimpses of thoughts caught then lovingly captured within the lines, never I hope your last poem . . . : )
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:50:00 PM
Your love so beatifully expressed dear Eve. Many congrats on your win in this contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 7/26/2020 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/poem. I love you line, "Absolute peace lives here In silence of my home." Peace is so wonderful to a writer. Enjoy your win and day............
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Date: 7/26/2020 5:43:00 AM
Bravo, Eve, on you well deserved top rank with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 7/26/2020 5:36:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:44:00 AM
Feeling emotional reading your wonderful work mam.Loved the second line ~with the crunching of rocks:-) Congratulations on your win.Keep inspiring:-) Take care .With love~Deepa:-)
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:41:00 AM
I think you share much of yourself in this one. A peaceful sentiment! Congratulations, Eve!
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Date: 7/26/2020 2:23:00 AM
A very deep and emotive poem.. I'm sure you can write for him and remind the world about him... touching poetry.. How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:10:00 AM
I dig the line "fill the pages with Enthralled memories". U b poet don't U know it.......................peace!
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Date: 7/18/2020 1:33:00 PM
Most certainly not yours...but what you have shared together gives you more than you could ever write...Well done
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Date: 7/18/2020 12:20:00 AM
Sad and mournful; expressed with great love and care. Hopefully not your actual last poem, though. Very nicely penned, Eve. Peace, Rest, always.
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