My Last Love Letter

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As I think about all the times, I thought about letting you know how I feel; I was terrified because I didn't want to risk our friendship. We have been friends since grade school. But once I reached puberty, my feelings for you started to shift. They came crashing around my heart like a mack truck. Did I always have feelings for you and too young to understand such feelings? As time went on, I knew you never saw me as anything but a best friend/sister. So I pushed my feelings aside because I just wanted you to stay in my life. But now you are about to walk down the aisle in two days. My heart breaks, and there is something I have to say, I love you with all my heart. Please don’t marry her….. With my love, Your Best Friend 01/07/2021 Contest:My Last Love Letter Sponsor:Mystic Rose

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2021 6:51:00 AM

... I hope it's not too late, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/8/2021 4:36:00 AM

An appropriate letter written for the occasion, in reality, I think you would never beg for his love! Love is offered freely! Wish you happiness and health , my dearest friend, Alexis. Hugs!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/7/2021 11:29:00 PM

That very much depends on him. Whom does he love? To change one's mind two days before marriage is a situation I hope I'll never be in. ~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2021 2:33:00 PM

oh what a sad one. it's gonna be too late to change anything, but I loved the sincere feelings expressed.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/7/2021 1:59:00 PM

I hope it isn't to late for her and it has a happy ending. Tom

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2021 10:58:00 AM

oh Alexis i wonder what would happen if he did act on the letter and perhaps jilted his bride at the altar. great one for the contest:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2021 10:39:00 AM

Well done, Alexis, good luck in the contest. I am not sure what she really wants. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/7/2021 10:40:00 AM

Hi Eve, I’m not sure either. I appreciate that you stopped by. Have a nice day my friend:-) Alexis