My Last Hour

Just an hour more,
and my life will be ended.
Just 3600 seconds left...
for my breath to be suspended.

Someone take my parents away,
eternal is their love for me.
My death would tear them apart,
their hearts will sink, if dead they see me.

Someone ask me,
what my last wish was?
Someone ask me ,
what i crave for?

I want my love next to me,
sitting besides, holding my hands.
The last wreath of love placed by him,
making my funeral a grand

Can someone please,
let my friends know i'm gone.
Please tell them once i'm dead,
always to be happy, never to frown.

This last hour would pass soon,
but i want my memories to remain.
Just bring a smile on your faces,
whenever you hear my name :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:52 PM
caroline, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Caroline :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Williams Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 7:08 AM
Apart from a couple of little spelling and punctuation mistakes, I really enjoyed this piece. Nice write
Gibbs Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 11:46 PM
i would really appreciate if you cud tell me my mistakes...for betterment in future
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