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My Last Hour

Just an hour more, and my life will be ended. Just 3600 seconds left... for my breath to be suspended. Someone take my parents away, eternal is their love for me. My death would tear them apart, their hearts will sink, if dead they see me. Someone ask me, what my last wish was? Someone ask me , what i crave for? I want my love next to me, sitting besides, holding my hands. The last wreath of love placed by him, making my funeral a grand Can someone please, let my friends know i'm gone. Please tell them once i'm dead, always to be happy, never to frown. This last hour would pass soon, but i want my memories to remain. Just bring a smile on your faces, whenever you hear my name :)

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Date: 2/20/2016 10:52:00 PM
caroline, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 7:53:00 PM
Caroline :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:08:00 AM
Apart from a couple of little spelling and punctuation mistakes, I really enjoyed this piece. Nice write
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Caroline Gibbs
Date: 7/21/2011 11:46:00 PM
i would really appreciate if you cud tell me my mistakes...for betterment in future

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