My Last Day To Live It Up

My Last Day To Live It Up

With one day left to live, I’d want to go to a water park and ride 
all of the water slides and float down the lazy river.

Then I would want to go eat Tex-Mex and drink a few margaritas to tax
the last few hours of my liver.

Then I would want to go to an amusement park and ride some roller coasters 
and bumper cars with rubber bumpers.

I would want to go to a rock concert and shake my money maker.

Watch the sun go down holding the hand of my lover.

Have an exciting night of passion filled with the best finale explosions that 
my body could handle and really shake the rafters.

Then I would say my prayers and fall into a deep slumber.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Many congratulations Marie on your win in Audrey's fine contest with this kool poem >> James
Mitchell Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 2:48 AM
That's some nice ways to live it up! Congrats on your win:)
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Congrats on your win, Marie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Congrats Marie my friend on your winning poem in Audrey's contest just finalized tonight.. an exceptional write and super win.. where u been lately? I am in Italy right now ..luv.. enjoy another sweet victory today..with luv.. ciao..
Devonshire Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Sounds like fun, Marie! Congratulations on your win in Audrey's contest. Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Congrats with your placement in Audrey's contest Marie, love Wilma
Haick Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Thanks for submitting your poem for my first sponsored contest, Marie. And congratulations on your 4th Place win. Thanks for being true to yourself in your writing. You wrote what you felt in this time of your life and as wisdom comes with age, you will grow in all aspects of your life! Love, peace, Audrey
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July 3, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Seems like we all would abuse the body for the last then run to God. Good Write. Sidney
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