My Kryptonite

Shyness, more than usual, had been my core kryptonite!
Innocent me! Like a panda bear, in my boyhood! Bright!
Girlish, the grown-ups crowned me! An inauspicious floret!
Praying: May boldness breathes in me by the Holy Spirit!!

Youthfulness, like a peacock, expressed blissful boyishness!
Cherished, as in a colorful garden, in joyousness!
There entered, as though foul eagles, the puritan grown-ups!
Blowing up every flaw of mine in colorful close-ups!!

Then, the kryptonite of my unwillingness to marry!
As I felt, I need not have heavy burdens to carry!
There crept in, the vultures, questioning my male potency!
Laughed! Abandoned me at the hands of divine destiny!!

A fallacy, like an unknown big bug, entered my brain!
Or a mess, hell-like, hidden by grown-ups, for greater gain!
Link of truth, broken betwixt my, fantasies and person!
Or elements, like messy knots, leading me to treason...!!

All these kryptonite, were not like black kraits, life-consuming!
But something unknown went within me was very glooming!
Though the meaning of life, like permanent flowers, blooming!
Dejections... despairs..., day after day, dignity dooming!!

Heavy drinking, nay, my drunkenness, lo, held its head high!
Like a fallen man’s land-hit-head, looking up to the sky!
Friends, angels of greed, no gain from me, left far from my sight!
Alcoholism, though an excuse, became my kryptonite!



07 October 2021
YOUR KRYPTONITE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Peck Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Christuraj, There are those who will find fault, regardless, as that is their Kryptonite against their failures. Your poem is strong; I hope you find another Kryptonite :)
Calasibetta Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations! Wow, it must have taken a lot of courage to face your "kryptonite"....Kudos. Blessings, Paulette
Alex Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:28 AM
Thank you very much.
Agustin Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 3:01 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing weakness in a poetic way; yet I pray that by the grace of the Lord, you will overcome it. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:29 AM
Thank you very much.
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 2:51 AM
I hope this is just fiction for the contest, Christuraj, congratulations on your win:)
Alex Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:29 AM
Thank you very much.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 3:39 PM
KRYPTONITE changing hands. Congratulations on your win, Christuraj!
Alex Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 11:13 PM
Thank you very much.
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:54 AM
A very brave write. Intimate. Congratulations.
Alex Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 11:13 PM
Thank you very much.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:13 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. "My Kryptonite" what a story/write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away...................
Alex Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 11:12 PM
Thank you very much.
Logan Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Chris, if this is real, I admire your courage to admit it. It's an expose' of your weakness, very well portrayed.
Alex Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Thank you very much.
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