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My Knight

On the horizon dawn sits My knight in shining armour Waits, gallantly he rides forth Embraces his bride and kiss Sponsor: Poet Destroyer, A Contest: Any poem under five lines Any form/subject

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/20/2015 6:59:00 PM

Excellent Jueju.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/28/2014 9:00:00 PM

Glad to see you did put this in a contest, I just love it! Reads like a fairy tale and give you a nice win. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/28/2014 9:18:00 AM

Awesome write Sara n so is the win! Big congrats!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/27/2014 6:03:00 PM

Congratulations Sarah on a fine write

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 5:59:00 PM

Cute one, Sara. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:25:00 AM

Good jueju, the new form. Congrats on the win, Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 5:10:00 AM

Wow I love it its a 7 from me:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless

Date: 8/26/2014 10:27:00 PM

Ah, Sara, a reflection on that "swept of your feet moment." Well done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:40:00 PM

Hello Sara, I enjoyed the poem, ... A sweet poem. :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/31/2014 6:22:00 AM

Very nice poem enjoyed, my sweet friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/30/2014 2:05:00 PM

Nice words! I wish you the best in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/30/2014 6:24:00 AM

Lovely!!! :) Nice to have a knight ready to sweep one of her feet. Hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/29/2014 9:27:00 PM

You have delighted me with this tremendous write here my friend! Sara I'm glad to be able to write some comments today and share my thoughts on some poetry...you surely have been doing magnificently, still wondrous you are! What a grandiose piece, great Work!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/29/2014 5:52:00 PM

Whoa! You did this awesome! It might not be in the contest but it is a winner! Great job, its a 7 from me :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/29/2014 5:36:00 PM

WOW! A fantastic "try"..... An accomplished goal my friend!!!