My Knight

 
On the horizon dawn sits My knight in shining armour Waits, gallantly he rides forth Embraces his bride and kiss
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer, A Contest: Any poem under five lines Any form/subject
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/20/2015 6:59:00 PM
Excellent Jueju.
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Date: 8/28/2014 9:00:00 PM
Glad to see you did put this in a contest, I just love it! Reads like a fairy tale and give you a nice win. :)
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Date: 8/28/2014 9:18:00 AM
Awesome write Sara n so is the win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/27/2014 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations Sarah on a fine write
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Date: 8/27/2014 5:59:00 PM
Cute one, Sara. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/27/2014 5:25:00 AM
Good jueju, the new form. Congrats on the win, Sara
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Date: 8/27/2014 5:10:00 AM
Wow I love it its a 7 from me:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/26/2014 10:27:00 PM
Ah, Sara, a reflection on that "swept of your feet moment." Well done.
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Date: 8/26/2014 9:40:00 PM
Hello Sara, I enjoyed the poem, ... A sweet poem. :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/31/2014 6:22:00 AM
Very nice poem enjoyed, my sweet friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/30/2014 2:05:00 PM
Nice words! I wish you the best in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/30/2014 6:24:00 AM
Lovely!!! :) Nice to have a knight ready to sweep one of her feet. Hugs
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Date: 7/29/2014 9:27:00 PM
You have delighted me with this tremendous write here my friend! Sara I'm glad to be able to write some comments today and share my thoughts on some poetry...you surely have been doing magnificently, still wondrous you are! What a grandiose piece, great Work!!
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:52:00 PM
Whoa! You did this awesome! It might not be in the contest but it is a winner! Great job, its a 7 from me :)
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:36:00 PM
WOW! A fantastic "try"..... An accomplished goal my friend!!!
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