My Knight

 
On the horizon dawn sits My knight in shining armour Waits, gallantly he rides forth Embraces his bride and kiss
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Negron Flores Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 6:59 PM
Excellent Jueju.
Nance Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:00 PM
Glad to see you did put this in a contest, I just love it! Reads like a fairy tale and give you a nice win. :)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Awesome write Sara n so is the win! Big congrats!
Trichet Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations Sarah on a fine write
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Cute one, Sara. Congrats for your win.
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 5:25 AM
Good jueju, the new form. Congrats on the win, Sara
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 5:10 AM
Wow I love it its a 7 from me:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Ah, Sara, a reflection on that "swept of your feet moment." Well done.
A   Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 9:40 PM
Hello Sara, I enjoyed the poem, ... A sweet poem. :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~
Devnath  Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Very nice poem enjoyed, my sweet friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Anish Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Nice words! I wish you the best in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Manassian Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 6:24 AM
Lovely!!! :) Nice to have a knight ready to sweep one of her feet. Hugs
Sivey Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 9:27 PM
You have delighted me with this tremendous write here my friend! Sara I'm glad to be able to write some comments today and share my thoughts on some poetry...you surely have been doing magnificently, still wondrous you are! What a grandiose piece, great Work!!
Nance Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Whoa! You did this awesome! It might not be in the contest but it is a winner! Great job, its a 7 from me :)
Lindley Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 5:36 PM
WOW! A fantastic "try"..... An accomplished goal my friend!!!
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