Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

My Knight

Now your mine, as we share the same ink
Quenching my thirst for loves refreshing drink 
Letting our words written tell our story
Of a deep love and all its formal glory

Your forever in my mind, you never leave 
Restoring my faith, see I now believe
Resting inside me each day and night
Your in my heart shinning so very bright

Softly caressing my imagination 
Teasingly tickling my anticipation
As you seduce my very thoughts
My heart feels tied up in knots

Sharing each other’s breathless sighs
Patiently awaiting your whispered replies
Intoxicating every ounce of my reserve
Your deep voice echoing off my every curve

Falling into each word you’ve spoken 
Making me feel like I am no longer broken 
Blessing star status you returned my lost light
The shining armour that holds my knight


July 24,2020

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John Fleming September 4, 2020 at 11:38 AM Must have missed this -- but congratulations on being chosen to feature! I have to agree with Hannington on this one, Brenda -- extraordinary rhyming powers indeed -- Queen of the "Rhymers"! Lots of affectionate wishes! :) john

Constance La France September 1, 2020 at 4:44 PM Brenda, congratulations on having your poem selected as a Featured Poem, it is truly beautiful, well done, a FAV for me _Constance Brenda Chiri September 3, 2020 at 5:16 AM Hey thank you! Much appreciated:)

Hannington Mumo August 28, 2020 at 2:54 PM Your extraordinary rhyming prowess left me gasping for more...the theme being a pretty hypnotizing one, and your taste-foreshadowing titling invitingly irresistible. Kudos! Brenda Chiri September 3, 2020 at 5:16 AM Thank you so much!:)

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 12:39 PM That's such an enchanting muse of glistening passion Brenda. Congratulations on your win! :) Brenda Chiri September 3, 2020 at 5:16 AM Thank you! ;)

Christopher Flaherty July 28, 2020 at 11:50 AM A Knight for his erstwhile Damsel Brenda Chiri July 28, 2020 at 11:51 AM Thank you so much!;) Christopher Flaherty July 28, 2020 at 11:50 AM Congratulations Brenda

Janice Canerdy July 28, 2020 at 9:34 AM Such a lovely, romantic poem, Brenda-- a WINNER! Janice Brenda Chiri July 28, 2020 at 11:10 AM Thank you Janice so much!:)

Patri Venkata Ramana July 28, 2020 at 2:33 AM Congrats on your top win! Brenda Chiri July 28, 2020 at 9:05 AM Thank you I appreciate that!;)

L. J. Carber July 27, 2020 at 11:21 AM Congrats Brenda on your 1st pl. win! Brenda Chiri July 28, 2020 at 9:05 AM Thank you so much!;)

Krish Radhakrishna July 26, 2020 at 9:50 PM Congrats Brenda on your win! This is so full of love! Beautiful!:) Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 11:15 PM Thank you so much!:)

Vijay Pandit July 26, 2020 at 6:26 AM WOW! Wonderful romantic tribute to the knight, my friend--your words inflame, Brenda. Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 9:02 AM Vijay thank you so very much! I really appreciate your comments and the read!;)

John Hamilton July 25, 2020 at 5:45 PM This is so good Brenda, knight in shining armor what every princess deserves! Brenda Chiri July 25, 2020 at 5:53 PM Thank you so much John! And yes what every lil girl dreams!;)