My Kiss

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The soft of her ventral 
            flesh
        not supple
          but soft

        malleable
      only because

 she was lenient with

         my kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wesley Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 11:17 AM
Such an exquisite description of a moment that is the beginning of something wonderful!
Shango Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 10:55 AM
I think the short form is bringing out something beyond brilliant in you ... you have the genius for it
Chircop Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 9:00 AM
ow so you are the prince here who softens her lips and she accepts willingly--romance flows in your verse--wonderful
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