Eileen Manassian Poet Iambic Pentameter

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My Kind

I will not dim my light so you can shine
I will not still my voice so you can scream
I will not quench my blaze so you can burn
I will not hush my thoughts so you can dream

I will not stifle truth so you can preach
I will not slink away so you can claim
I will not be demure so you can boast
I will not bend my head so you can blame

I will not hide my thirst so you can drink
I will not stave my wants so you can eat
I will not follow, just to let you lead
I will not stand so you can take my seat

Equality is what I’m striving for
The days must end when men demand to rule
My voice will not be silenced; all will hear:
A woman is a blessing, not a tool

She is the beauty of bejeweled night
She is the wonder of the dawning day
Her wisdom she can temper with her might
She is the one to show Compassion's way

You do her wrong when you suppress her song
When callus hearted-mind sees but her form
Her virtue is her gentle loving soul
Tranquility is she when not the storm

I will not be untrue to gendered grace
to fit the manly notions of your mind
I’ll speak and love and laugh, and yes, I’ll thrive!
With pride I’ll see you bow to womankind

Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux April 25, 2020 at 12:21 PM I am fond of your kind. Hugs Rick.

Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2019 at 9:09 AM It seems I am drawn to this one once again. Hugs Rick.

Richard Lamoureux June 15, 2019 at 1:00 AM The last timeIread this one was I. 2017. Worth reading again.

Linda Milgate July 26, 2018 at 12:45 PM wow, just read in 2018. Great poem.

Debbie Duncan June 3, 2017 at 3:09 PM Very nice write :)

Anil Deo May 5, 2017 at 3:23 AM making my 7 stick, lol! By the way ...FROGS (inside the word 'FORGiveneSs' was used on the PS site to mock other writers here. Be that as it may, it is one of the plagues visited upon Pharoah and slaveholders. Shalom (Peace-Strength-Completeness) Anil Eileen Manassian May 5, 2017 at 3:27 AM Ah...yes, of course. :) I understand now. I do know about the plague of the frogs on the Egyptians. I wondered if it had another meaning. Thanks so much for the explanation.

Anil Deo May 5, 2017 at 3:21 AM "A woman is a blessing not a tool." Biblical! God called Eve ...Helpmate" for Adam. Nations suckled on slavery. Recall indentured servants built 'The 13' US colonies. Virginia had its "tobacco brides." Pocohontas & Sacajaweja were Indian patriots of a future USA. In India & China, starving moms spoiled "sons" so those individuals would become stars. SEVENs and shalom, shalom!ypr Eileen Manassian May 5, 2017 at 3:28 AM Yes...sad realities, my dear. Bringing then to light brings awareness. Thanks for sharing.

Shubham Kamble May 4, 2017 at 3:36 AM A powerful message :) beautiful writing !! A 7 Eileen Manassian May 5, 2017 at 3:29 AM Thank you, Shubham. Appreciate the visit.

Edward Snyder May 2, 2017 at 2:22 PM a nice shout for gender equality, nice write Eileen Eileen Manassian May 5, 2017 at 3:29 AM Thank you, Edward. Much appreciated.

Uzoeto Johnpaul April 29, 2017 at 2:02 AM Simple words, amazing rendering, and a very clear message sent.. .....very nice. ......you must be a feminist, I guess

Darlene De Beaulieu April 28, 2017 at 2:17 PM Eileen, I found this poem to be a good write. A 7 Nice to meet you. I like the way the words flow in your poem.

Scott Thirtyseven April 28, 2017 at 10:31 AM I like the way you progress in this piece. And I wholeheartedly agree. Well deserved of your 3rd place in the top 100.

Maria Williams April 26, 2017 at 3:34 AM This is a powerful poem delivered by a powerful poet. I can see my dear Eileen that you speak in a strong voice for all women Thank you. A Super 7++ Eileen Manassian May 5, 2017 at 3:35 AM Thank you, Maria. I try my best to bring to light some of the issues that women face...I appreciate your visit and words.

Maurice Yvonne April 22, 2017 at 3:48 AM Also so many great lines and in Iambic Pentameter no less. Eileen Manassian April 22, 2017 at 1:02 PM Thanks...though this is very old school...IP...I love writing in this form. Thanks for your kind comment, Armand. Hugs

Maurice Yvonne April 22, 2017 at 3:46 AM I couldn't agree more. A great message written with your usual flair. An excellent poem of great importance. A Fav. Lots Of Love, always armand. Eileen Manassian April 22, 2017 at 1:02 PM Good to have you visit, dear. I appreciate the kind comment. Blessings.

Manmath Dalei April 22, 2017 at 2:27 AM Dear Eileen, Enjoyed the read. Congratulation for ur well deserved placement as best new poem. A 7+ from me.............//hugs Eileen Manassian April 22, 2017 at 1:02 PM Thank you, Manmath. I'm happy to receive your congratulations. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2017 at 5:56 AM - Dear Eileen ... wow ...congratulations on your ninth place in "Best New Poems" ... a powerful poem ! - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian April 21, 2017 at 2:02 AM Thank you, my dear Sunshine. You always bring my heart warmth. Hugs

Candace Hodges April 15, 2017 at 8:59 AM I love this poem! This is an incredibly awesome write! So soulful and powerful! Women rule! Let the women today stand strong and show we are more than wifes, mother's and something to screw! Women rock! Eileen Manassian April 21, 2017 at 2:04 AM Yes, dear....we are definitely more than all that... :) Thank you for joining your voice to mine. I'll be by to visit you soon. :)

Mama Bear April 14, 2017 at 11:17 AM So eloquently voiced and well presented and lets hope that this makes more people aware Congratulations on POTD this was well deserved Have not been on soup for a while and must admit that I have missed some great poems blessings and hugs Edith Eileen Manassian April 21, 2017 at 2:07 AM Dear Mama Bear....I'm so glad to get a visit from you. I'm sorry I've not been very communicative of late. :) I'm glad you liked this piece...I'll send you a message soon. Hugs, dear

Gary Bateman April 13, 2017 at 8:24 PM Hello Eileen, Congratulations on POTD!! An extraordinarily powerful "IP" verse with tremendous heartfelt meaning and passion. All men and women should be treated the same way. And men have, I think, a special obligation to ensure that all women are treated with the utmost dignity, respect, and honor. I know my wife is truly my best friend and confidant. I would be lost without her!! A wonderful write here indeed!! SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary Eileen Manassian April 21, 2017 at 2:09 AM Bless you for acknowledging your dependence and love for your wife, Gary. It is heartwarming. Thank you for passing by this piece. As to IP writing...I love it! It comes naturally to me...and I enjoy writing in this form. :)

Paul Callus April 7, 2017 at 1:37 PM You fight and argue for your and women's rights, Eileen. This is powerful, expressive and meaningful. Your message is loud and clear; may it spread across every continent! I can hear Flo applauding you:) ~ Congrats on POTD!! Hugs // paul Eileen Manassian April 21, 2017 at 2:10 AM Yes...FLO would definitely carry the standard high, dear. Thank you for always being supportive and kind. You know I love hearing your opinion and comments on my writes. Blessings, dear.

Vladislav Raven April 7, 2017 at 9:10 AM Hi Eileen, Congratulations on your Poem Of The day. Catching up on things. This poem was much deserving of the accolade. An excellent write from your golden pen. This has to be a seven. Hug....Mike. XX Eileen Manassian April 21, 2017 at 2:11 AM Thanks, Mike. I'm glad you are catching up on things and getting back into the loop here. I will be by to visit you soon. Blessings.

Bernardo F. Asuncion April 5, 2017 at 8:31 PM Awesome and remarkable.... congrats on being chosen.... Eileen Manassian April 6, 2017 at 12:08 AM Thank you, Bernard. I appreciate the visits. :)

Darren White April 5, 2017 at 2:29 PM So strong Eileen, so powerful. Equality is what we work for :) Grats on PotD Eileen Manassian April 6, 2017 at 12:31 AM Thanks, my dear. Ultimately, it's still a man's world. We do what we can. ;) Sometimes...all we can do is roar. Hugs

Freddie Robinson Jr. April 5, 2017 at 2:04 PM There is nothing I can add that the other talented poetesses/poets have not said. Reminds me of the song, "I Am Woman." Beautiful write. Kudos for POTD. Love always for you. Eileen Manassian April 6, 2017 at 12:32 AM Thanks, Freddie. I'm glad that you visited. It's good for this poem to get some coverage. It's not always easy to speak out, but one must when needed. Blessings and love

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