My Journey Through Life

On my journey through life
I carry with me, pride;
Keeping it under control
With some humility on the side.

I am proud of my heritage,
And those who’s last name that I share;
My parents and siblings
All helped to get me here.

I am proud of my children,
And the adults they’ve become;
And proud of coming grandchildren
With whom I’ll have much fun.

I am proud of my accomplishments,
As limited as they may be;
I found they were sufficient enough
To provide for my family.

I am proud of these poems I write,
Though they may lack artistic flare;
I am even proud of the fact
That gracefully I lost my hair.

And I find now that my life’s journey
Is beginning to near it’s end,
The pride doesn’t start to fade -
It only gets deepened.

So please don’t think of me
As being arrogant;
But, I am proud of my journey through life
And how my time was spent.


Written for the "I Carry With Me ..." contest, sponsored by Paula Swanson.
Written and posted on 5/10/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/14/2012 9:09:00 AM
May your journey always be proud and continue for eternity. Beautifully written Joe!
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Joe. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:17:00 AM
Congrats Joe on on fabulous win in this contest. it's an invaluable virtue when pride has humility alongside...loved reading your fine creative work here..gautami
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Date: 5/15/2011 10:05:00 AM
Wow, Joe. I learned so much about u in this winning write. There is not a shred of arrogance contained in this piece..... your poems do not lack artistic flair either, you are at the top of your game today! Congrats on your wonderful journey and reflective work here on the soup. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/15/2011 9:05:00 AM
It sounds like you have had a good life. great job! Congrats!
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:55:00 AM
And with every good reason....your pride is worthy to carry along on your life's journey! .....Great job, Joe!! Congrats!
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:04:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this magnificent write my friend.. enjoy another top ten win with luv.. hope all is well with u and your family ...
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Date: 5/15/2011 6:59:00 AM
Excellent write here!Congrats Joe on your win..
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:32:00 AM
Congrats Joe!!! well written love your way of life here!!....
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Date: 5/14/2011 11:19:00 PM
Wonderfully written piece of poetry, a proud and meaningful piece of work! Many congrats x
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:32:00 PM
delighted to see you in the winners' hall, dear joe.. sweet congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:23:00 PM
Wonderful write Joe. Congrats.
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:53:00 AM
this is a positive meaning of pride, joe... so skillfully-scribes; so proud of this one with winning delight! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/11/2011 3:49:00 AM
Reading a winner this morn..Sara
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