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My journey is one of balance and harmony, I am a water metaphor that adapts its shape; always flowing, yielding, softly and quietly, but strong enough to cut into rock and reshape. I chose a way to nature and contemplation, to create my inner sanctuary; an open gate, a secret garden creation, a place where all turmoil I can bury. I am on my own unique beautiful journey, where I can let go of time and slow down; with moderation in all things and no need to hurry; and be independent as a star shining alone. ____________________ September 23, 2022 Poetry/Quatrain/My Journey Copyright Protected, ID 09-1489-966-23 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 09/25/2022 Sixth Place

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Date: 10/6/2022 10:07:00 AM
So lovely and gentle Constance. This poem doesn't scream at us but gently reshapes rock like flowing water. Congratulations on your win with this poem that flows with originality and thought provoking images. Blessings on your journey!
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Date: 10/6/2022 3:22:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/26/2022 12:53:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Constance ... beautiful poem :) - hugs
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Date: 9/26/2022 1:52:00 PM
Sunshine, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, hugs, Constance
Date: 9/25/2022 8:47:00 PM
"water metaphor that adapts its shape" - Great metaphor in itself. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/26/2022 1:53:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/25/2022 12:45:00 AM
Lovely Constance, simply beautiful <3
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Date: 9/25/2022 6:09:00 AM
BJ, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment, Constance
Date: 9/23/2022 1:23:00 PM
....nice write......the tao path....a balance point in time....stans sand
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Date: 9/23/2022 1:33:00 PM
Stan, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, blessings

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