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My Jazmine

Her eyes are brown, Her smile is wide. she has stolen my heart, she holds my dreams. she never ceases to amaze me; her voice is like soft music in my ears, her kiss is like a sweet cherry freshly picked, she smells like a full bloomed rose. as i hold her now i see my life and wife in her eyes. she is my bellissima amour. we grew up together, we used to play together, who could have known? she would be my love my one, my only my Jazmine. i wrote this on valentines day for my girlfriend Jazmine, we were doing poetry in school, adn we had to make a valentines daypoem for something we love, i chose the thing (in this case a person) that i love mos...Jazmine. i actua;lly have a few drawings that go with igt bugt, im not sure how to put them on here so...

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Date: 5/19/2013 1:39:00 PM
Jordan, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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Jordan Miller
Date: 5/20/2013 8:31:00 AM
wow thank you, this is an honor.
Date: 4/26/2013 8:00:00 PM
Jordon, ;-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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Dyp The Wolf
Date: 4/28/2013 12:14:00 AM
yeah and it was a loooonnng talk till i finally convinced you too! but no regrets right?
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Jordan Miller
Date: 4/27/2013 11:50:00 AM
yeah thank you, so far i love this community, and i would like you to tell me what you think of my poems...you see normally im not very good at writing and after my friend read a few of my poems, he told me to join him on this, so he got me set up on here.
Date: 4/25/2013 7:30:00 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! DAS SO CUTE! hahaha WHOOP WHOOP bro!
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Jordan Miller
Date: 4/26/2013 4:29:00 AM
thanks jim

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