My Interpretation of If By Rudyard Kipling

If you can keep calm when all around you,
Are frustrated, and angry with you,
Always believe in yourself, and be true,
Don’t be too proud, be positive with others too,
All good things come to those who wait,
Don’t ever listen to lies, that’s a fact,
Try to avoid being hated, don’t ever hate,
Do not show off, and from yourself distract.

Dream, but do not let dreams absorb you,
Put all to thought, and exercise this through,
If you succeed, become befallen too,
And meet these dire opposites at their game,
Stand up to truths that you believe in,
They know not what they speak, they only shame,
So jealous of your hard earnings, a twin to sin, 
They try to mimic, to no avail, they do not gain.

Put all you have achieved to one side,
Knowing who you are, believe in do or die,
You might lose, begin again, with it abide,
Tell no one of any loss, reach for the sky,
If you can use your strength, and soul,
To carry on, as grace helps you to become whole,
And try everything within, to reach your goal,
Tell them I’ll carry on, not dig myself a hole.

If you speak with others, to thy self be true,
Be proud, never lose sight of who you are,
If friend or foes have no ability to scar,
If they agree with what you say, but not with all,
Be forgiving, don’t think you're better, and then fall,
If all you say is sound within sixty seconds,
You have achieved your worth, which always beckons,
And - indeed more - you’ll be a man my son!


POTW - 8/12/2022
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Lindley Avatar
June 17, 2023 at 12:49 PM
Kipling is number 7 in my favorite top 10 famous authors. Your extraordinary poem is right on the mark. A fav.. A gem too.
Tor Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Jennifer this is incredible Poetry. Sorry for late response. A favorite.
Kaufman Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 1:45 AM
Belated congratulations Ms. Jennifer..words of wisdom for us all.
Kiser Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations on the POTW! Beautifully penned and you nailed it.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations on your POTW. A wonderful write. I love it. Blessings...........
Mccann Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Jennifer, this is truly amazing! A fav for sure. I shall read it again and again. Thank you so much! Elizabeth
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. Way to go. I like that one by Rudyard Kipling. Thanks for sharing your interpretation of it and for dropping by my page. Sara
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 7:13 PM
How did I miss your noble rendering of this classic as POTW, Jennifer?! Looks as if my bouts of on-and-off sleep are lasting longer and longer! ~ Rip Van Wolf
Eslinger Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations! Great up penning! In 1950’, I think all parents hung this in one or all kids’s rooms. Was also 1stlesson in use of male nouns/pronouns meaning to include the female. I liked it as a child, but thought it more demanding the Sermon on Mount. All the demands for perfect, no wonder we gave up and became hippies…
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December 12, 2022 at 3:56 PM
Congratulations, Dear Jennifer, on your POTW. Your interpretation of Rudyard Kipling's poem is brilliant, and deserve the honour. Wise and profound thoughts, so creatively penned. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Kitchin Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 4:51 AM
Jennifer, congratulations on POTW!
Meadows Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 11:38 PM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
Nicole Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 9:31 PM
If you speak with others, to thy self be true, never lose sight of who you are." I completely agree. Jennifer, you've created a masterpiece with your words. This is beautiful and uplifting, all at the same time. I'm holding your thoughts so close. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:53 PM
oh and I am seeing POW . Wow. congrats
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:53 PM
you chose a great man to emulate with your words. Great words of advice indeed
Poet Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Jennifer, you have done an excellent job interpreting Rudyard Kipling's poem "If," and you should be congratulated and very proud of the honor of being selected as the recipient of the poem of the week. Appreciate your kind comments on my page. Hugs and blessings
Watt Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Dear Jenn, there is a big smile on my face knowing you have been given the Poem of the Week for your If adaptation. I hope you find much joy for this blessing bestowed upon you, even as you have brought blessings to so many.
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December 11, 2022 at 4:56 PM
A wonderful interpretation of Rudyard Kipling’s poem *If* well done and congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week Jennifer. Hugs and blessings… Belle
La France Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Jennifer, wow, inspiring ! I needed to read this today. A Fav for me. Congratulations on receiving your deserving POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings
Cunningham Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 1:25 AM
Back with congratulations Jennifer on the well deserved honour of POTW. Tom
Watt Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 6:10 PM
I just love your adaptation of one of my favorite all-time poems, now yours is going in my faves to enjoy again and again. You and I have much in common, including the high value of humility and forgiveness, balanced by a resolute nature that stands up for what one believes is right. So well done, my friend. Blessings and hugs ~ John
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December 10, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Just do what you believe to be right even when others think you are wrong and even shun you for it. Hold no grudge for wrong doings just carry on and when in doubt don't - Ask Jesus for guidance when in doubt. Don't let anyone know too much about you because familiarity often breeds contempt and you can be giving your enemy ammunition. This is great stuff and a fave for me. God Bless, JB
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December 9, 2022 at 2:05 AM
That's right. Stand up and be tall and always on the right side of things.
Cunningham Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Love your interpretation Jennifer, hope you are keeping well. Tom
Lawless Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Always been one of my favorites, Jennifer. nice job on the "update"
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