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My insolent heart

My insolent heart
is audacious.
It dives into your words
Feels your presence,
Makes love to you
My insolent heart 
Knows the truth
you are unreachable.
it ventures around old memories, 
recalls ,
recollects and 
My insolent heart
Takes me away from sanity
Gives me a false hope.
Makes me irrational
Causes irreparable 
My insolent heart 
Knows no boundaries 
It immigrates to a forbidden land where 
love breaks the barrier.
I wonder why my heart is insolent. .
Your blue eyes 
Your  blue eyes


Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 6/2/2016 8:53:00 AM
Ah! Those blue eyes can evoke so many emotions, Red! Their magnetic force could become uncontrollable, and you could easily find yourself unable to resist their allure! And temptation becomes even greater, knowing that the subject of your feelings is unreachable...!! This is one of those moments when mind and heart fail to reach a compromise! ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:52:00 AM
Yes Paul! You know for sure the man behind this insolent write...!!! Aaah old memories... I want to take a deep breath... It was one of the most unfrgettable moments of my lfe... I couldn't forget... Never ! Thank you for reading a piece of y heart ~Red
Date: 5/14/2016 11:22:00 PM
There is power in this poem, and it comes to the fore in the unforgettable last three lines. Congratulations, Red, on an exceptionally well conceptualized and crafted composition.
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Date: 3/12/2016 9:15:00 PM
Hi Red, Great title that I had to click on and it did not disappoint--fantastic imagery and passionate verse. Nicely done! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:07:00 AM
It doesn't sound like you heart is insolent, it sounds like a warm lovely place.
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:38:00 PM
My wife dearly loves my blue eyes. Great poem, clearly a ride that delivers and intrigues the reader. A7
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Date: 5/27/2015 4:15:00 AM
Wonderful read
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Date: 9/16/2013 3:23:00 PM
Red, it has been such a long time since we spoke, I have not been here in months and I have missed you so much, this is such a beautiful write and it reaches out to my heart, I love it...very well written and lots of feeling put into it, well done....David xx
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Date: 9/15/2013 11:24:00 AM
you are a great poetess as always and will be for a long time to come....may your heart beat with warm poetry that never ceases.
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Date: 9/14/2013 1:53:00 PM
I love this poem so much! It speaks so much to me! My heart is uplifted when I read this great write you produced! Another thing, you have a blue eyed lover, this person you really like, or love! You have a good day and weekend! signed from the blue poet! My love for you... Christopher! :) xoxoxo! Live, Laugh and Love!
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Date: 9/14/2013 12:09:00 PM
Personal. Yet, it has a means for others to attach their own significance. Nicely written.
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Date: 9/13/2013 11:56:00 AM
great poem love has a cheeky way about it .i enjoyed reading it red! tina x
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:29:00 AM
Good morning Red
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Date: 9/12/2013 5:37:00 PM
I can relate to this poem. Powerful verse! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/11/2013 7:09:00 PM
Your not the only owner.
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:08:00 AM
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Date: 9/10/2013 8:34:00 PM
This is beautiful and romantic. I hope you get the guy. All these emotions can be very exciting and overwhelming. Well done Red!
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Red Fiery
Date: 9/10/2013 8:39:00 PM
thank you Richard...this was about my past..which cannot be revived now..:(
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2013 8:35:00 PM
Adding to my favorites!
Date: 9/10/2013 10:42:00 AM
The power of blue...may the heart have answers instead of unfinished chapters. Excellent expressions here. Great to see something new from you too!
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Date: 9/10/2013 9:25:00 AM
7...ooops...Forgot the 7.
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Date: 9/10/2013 9:23:00 AM
Red....this is absolutely eyes can do that to you... ;-)Your insolent heart needs some love...Gorgeous. I'm faving it....Hugs....You are a sister in romance....7. Great writing...
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Date: 9/10/2013 5:47:00 AM
- Hey Red, thanks for the beautiful and yearning poem! - Have a sweet day! (like the red bike helmet, so cute :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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