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My Insane Life As a Bubble

My life as a bubble began just then, 
When I appeared under this dazzling rip curl.
I was pushed deep down, then around and around,
Caught up in this wave of a swirl.

I feel beautiful, so round and unique, 
And I love my friend, the sea horse.
But I feel myself going up and I don’t know why,
Being pulled up by some other force.

I love my life as a bubble down here, 
Living in a beautiful, bizarre, frenzied insane.
I hope when I reach my heaven another wave catches me,
And I exist, down here, once again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 13, 2016 at 9:12 PM
what wonderful imagery of the bubble being alive in the safe haven of the sea Lewis - I see my poetry as being my protective bubble:-) hugs jan xx
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