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My insane life as a bubble

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My life as a bubble began just then, When I appeared under this dazzling rip curl. I was pushed deep down, then around and around, Caught up in this wave of a swirl. I feel beautiful, so round and unique, And I love my friend, the sea horse. But I feel myself going up and I don’t know why, Being pulled up by some other force. I love my life as a bubble down here, Living in a beautiful, bizarre, frenzied insane. I hope when I reach my heaven another wave catches me, And I exist, down here, once again.

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Date: 12/13/2016 9:12:00 PM
what wonderful imagery of the bubble being alive in the safe haven of the sea Lewis - I see my poetry as being my protective bubble:-) hugs jan xx
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