My Inner Sight
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Charonnet
Invented by Charles Messina A poem with a rhyme scheme (ABAB, CCDD, EFGH, II). Also in the last "stanza" NOT the couplet. You must re-arrange the words in lines AB & AB in the first stanza. (8) syllables in each line, no more or less.
I cried when I learned I’d go blind,
it hurt, but don’t feel sad for me.
To blame God, never crossed my mind,
though shadows are all that I see.
I'll miss the colors of sunset,
nature's face craved in silhouette.
The sweet smiles on my friend's faces,
and the world's prettiest places.
When I learned I’d go blind, it hurt,
but don’t feel sad for me I cried.
Never crossed my mind, though shadows
are all that I see, to blame God.
Even now, I’m not without light,
for I’ve retained my inner sight.
(Charonnet)
09/02/2020
Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2020
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