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My Ink Has Penned Passion

Be still my heart, I’ve longed for these entries, I must declare to write in euphony- My ink has penned passion for centuries and my vibrant poems bring symphony. Oh LORD, you’ve gifted me benediction. My rhymes have become my significance- I compose verses without restriction, my parchment says it’s no coincidence. If journals reveal intimate feelings, then thousandfold words I cherish so deep- Sincere allowance for woe gives healing, yet my adoration for life I keep. Expressing my desires with quill in hand attains yearning I’ll never understand. Date Written: August 26, 2016

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Tom Arnone

Date: 9/1/2016 11:06:00 PM

Your passion for writing in sonnet shows through, Laura. Congrats! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2016 4:36:00 PM

Laura, your poem had some close attachment to me. I use to write in a diary my traumas when they occurred, but only then and I have kept them very secret. Now that I'm writing they are open to the world. Hugs Eve and congratulations on your win sweet friend

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/27/2016 3:15:00 PM

Hi Luloo, a n expressive sonnet on passion. An excellent write. Passion lives as does desire. Equal in measure love is reached. I always love the content in sonnets. The flow gentle, the rhythm holding from start to end. A wonderful write Luloo. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Daver Austin

Date: 8/26/2016 8:15:00 PM

Introspection, yes. You seem passionate about it, and I fully agree on its value. daver