My Hypocrisy

Were I to know your depth’s degree
I’d want to dive quite fearlessly
give all the things required of me
to plunge into our destiny.

Were I to touch the heaven’s gate
I’ll even bear hell’s jealous hate
for being in this tortured state
you’ll see that I’m your destined fate.

Were I to scale the steepest height
of friendship's pleasure and delight
I’d want to share our deep insight
fun and laughter each day and night.

Were I to taste your sweetest kiss
I’d want to stay, that I won’t miss
for too long I did wait for this
the moment our souls meet…a bliss.

Were I to hear your heart’s desire
I'd want to touch, feel the fire
the fiercest heat while wind and choir
rise to the highest notes of lyre.

Were I to hold the strength of yours
absorb the substance of your force
I’d want to leave a charted course
and row with passion’s guiding oars.

Were I to ride the ocean’s waves
before it feeds the tempest’s graves
I’d want the shelter your heart saves
for you my love, it’s I… who craves.

But, were you to ask this of me 
be your true love eternally
I still cannot accept, you see
…this is my sad hypocrisy.

So I'll pretend not loving you
I'd rather hurt ourselves in lieu
of people who shared our lives' hue
before my world got splashed by you.


KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
What is Your Hypocrisy Contest - 1st Place
08 April 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/24/2015 10:31:00 PM
Brilliant, introspective poem fully deserving of a first-place win. Congratulations, Kim. hugs x x x
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Date: 7/2/2015 8:34:00 AM
You know what, Kim? I just realized that your style is not unlike my own. Very cool... Perfectionist Bishes unite!
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Date: 6/12/2015 9:51:00 PM
Kim Congratulations, thank you for supporting my million dollar poem contest. luv --SKAT--
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Date: 5/13/2015 1:41:00 PM
7 - Loved this one and not surprised that it won the Hypocrisy contest (that sounds like an insult, but isn't) :-) Enjoying your wonderful work, Brendan.
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Date: 5/13/2015 11:15:00 AM
Truly a wonderful piece - thank you I enjoyed. Anna xx
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Date: 5/12/2015 6:29:00 PM
Excellent! I love this poem! Nice rhythm.
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Date: 5/1/2015 11:43:00 PM
Nice win Kim, SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2015 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your deserving win. An excellent fine piece. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 4/28/2015 3:00:00 PM
KIm, this #1 rocks... WOW... LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2015 10:38:00 AM
Galing !! I knew it from the instant I read it!! kudos! :)~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/28/2015 6:41:00 AM
Ate KIm! Galing! Congrats
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:18:00 PM
Amazing passionate write. Congrats on top win.
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:11:00 PM
Wonderful write Kim! A lot of heart went into this poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:38:00 PM
This is indeed a masterpiece, soul-wrenching and stunning. Had to return to this pleasurable write and congratulate you on the first place win! Well deserved for sure.. "I’d want the shelter your heart saves for you my love, it’s I… who craves." Love that line. It truly pulls on the heartstrings. Beautiful work! <3 Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/28/2015 1:11:00 AM
Thanks, dearest! Will be reading some more of your work tonight! I admire this -you are a very creative poet...~Laura
Date: 4/27/2015 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :~) Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/27/2015 12:10:00 PM
Such a powerful write Kim many congrats on your top spot i am delighted for you:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2015 1:26:00 AM
:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2015 9:51:00 AM
Well done and congrats!
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:29:00 AM
Kim, stopping back again to offer my heartfelt congratulations to you for your First Place top of the podium win for this amazing poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/27/2015 6:56:00 AM
Great write and win Kim....Congrats
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Date: 4/23/2015 5:51:00 AM
This is just beautiful... I am in awe of this piece. Amazing work Kim. I loved these lines:"I'd want to touch, feel the fire the fiercest heat while wind and choir rose to the highest notes of lyre." ...so sensuous, so passionate.. awesome! Good luck in the contest! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/22/2015 5:52:00 PM
Great write.
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Date: 4/21/2015 11:14:00 PM
I love this! I feel you. Great write!
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:04:00 PM
Wow. This is really an amazing write. Thought provoking and insightful. Well done, truly.
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Date: 4/20/2015 5:36:00 PM
Nice poem. True conflict between giving full love to the one you love. We all suffer from hypocrisy at times.
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Date: 4/14/2015 3:46:00 AM
Your hypocrisy is cruel, honest in it's hurt...love untrue the heart never knew. So keep your crave and good heart save from a tragic grave...This poem's truth is so severe and sad. This is a masterpiece of love nature, having the courage to be true to your needs Kim...J.A.B.
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