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My Husband Part I

Been meaning to write this for months but didn't know where to start.. So let's take a dive

Pat him on the back and give him a smile
Say he is a lucky man
And in choosing me, he showed his style

But he knows there's more than beauty deep inside,
Tolerant of my crazy ideas,
He quickly realized these looks are to misguide

My husband is a real dreamer
To map his ideas out would take years,
Yet he stays quiet, definitely not a screamer

My husband is also my best friend
Caring, compassionate
He is with me to the end

One time I asked him what if I accidentally killed
He said, he'd find a body disposal service
Hire a man who is skilled

Around me he is so awestruck
We could cross a busy street
He'd be just staring at me and we'd get hit by a truck

When I look wide eyed at him
His face lights up
And I know he can't feel a single limb

My husband and I
We are two lost swans
Venturing the world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/13/2014 10:08:00 AM
Lovely and romantic! Hope the two swans will cross many waterways together...lost in love:) // paul
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Princess Xia
Date: 9/13/2014 10:55:00 AM
ha yes, many many waterways d:
Date: 8/22/2014 9:27:00 PM
Xia....you are a romantic soul in a marriage that has love, humor and wit! Loved this !!
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Princess Xia
Date: 8/23/2014 10:56:00 AM
Thank you very much (:
Date: 8/16/2014 11:53:00 PM
ahhhh very very very romantic and beautiful!
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Princess Xia
Date: 8/17/2014 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Arthur!

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