Notes About The Poem

Sometimes in life ~ the one who tries to make everyone happy, turns out to be the most lonely

 

 

My Hunger For Love

In my insatiable hunger to be loved, I feasted at wrong tables.
Cried too many useless tears for love that only exists in fables.
I drank deeply of intoxicating wines, until I was no longer able
to clearly see the warning of "poison" was written on the label.

In my thirst to be wanted, I gave in to the whims of many others...
to those who'd been abandoned and in need,  who sought mothers
to the selfish ones who craved their evil desires, one after another
until I realized I'd fallen into a deep pit, and very nearly smothered.

I'd been ripped apart and broken into a million pieces...  shattered
and my jagged shards thrown about until I felt I no longer mattered
shots to my body, wounds to my soul,  heart bruised and battered
Is it even worth the living when my life has been torn and tattered?

Then he came along with a love not born of only a casual caress.
He taught me devotion is not something bought or possessed.
When at last I found the courage to face the truth and confess,
I was gifted with being loved, the answer to my prayer's request.

He held me in his arms, embraced in love's most tender grip.
At last my insatiable hunger was sated by the touch of his lips.
Quenched was my desire for drink when his nectar I'd sipped.
This rescuer helped me up;  kept me standing when I slipped

He saw in me what I could not, and did not scorn me as a child.
transformed me into a woman, as one no longer I could revile.
He took my brokenness, and made me beautiful with his smile.
Lifted me out of the deep pit when we walked down the aisle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Osho Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:26 PM
that was awesome. well expressed lin. i loved it
Lane Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Thank you very much, Francis
Sims Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 10:41 PM
awesome just love it
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:00 AM
Thank you very much, Lemonia.
A  Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Lin, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
Lane Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Thank you very much, SKAT.
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Lovin it! Jagged shards wow! Mono rhyme in each stanza! Masterfully done, a very difficult form, but handled with ease. John
Lane Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 5:57 PM
I thank you very much, John. Sometimes it flows... sometimes it's a crumpled paper ball in the trash can. Glad you liked this one.
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:35 PM
Fabulous rhyme Lin - finding the right one can be a real battle but it is worth it in the end - love the positivity in the poem - a happy ending is what we all dream of:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 5:56 PM
Thanks, Jan. It was nice to write a happy ending this time.
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Sometimes the search for real love is a tumultuous battle but when we get there it is all worth the pain.
Lane Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Yes, Tim, and that's why it hurts so much when we lose it. Thank you for commenting. ;)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace