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My Horse Black Star

I have had many joyful dreams in my childhood, but I recall some very emotional too; and I would tell them all out loud in make-believe, playing make-believe was something I loved to do. I rambled on for hours and hours, hours, and a writer was blooming in my re-telling; but one dream I kept secret and close to my heart, in the dream I heard drums beating and a black horse. In this dream Black Star was my war horse majestic, and I- an Indian princess and warrior; I fought for the rights of my people the Ojibwe, I battled to keep our lands and our waters safe. But, it was only the dream of an Ojibwe child; now truth is- that Canada is disappearing. _____________________________ April 17, 2019 Poetry/Verse/My Horse Black Star Copyright Protected, ID 19-1135-392-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Poem of the Day - April 19, 2019
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Hello Dear Heart, you had a beautiful dream.It seemed so real to you. have a nice day my friend.
La France Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Darlene, it seemed real because it was real !
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:24 PM
Bravo on your POTD, Constance. Awesome poem.
La France Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Line, thanks for the awesome and for the compliment !
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 6:17 PM
Beautiful dreams in heartbreak. Congrats on POTD!
La France Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats !
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:22 PM
- A wonderful poem, D.H. ... Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~
Trifiatis Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations my friend, Robert! Brilliant!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Congratulations my friend, Robert! Brilliant!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 2:03 AM
What a dream, Dear Heart! You carried my soul to your mysterious realm! Congratulations on your POTD! Regards and blessings.
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Besma, congratulations for seeing the beauty in my poem and the the congratulations on POTD ~
Lindley Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 9:18 PM
I am back to congratulate you on a well deserved POTD my dear friend. Beautiful poetry....
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Robert, thanks you so much for the congratulations on my POTD, I am over the moon happy for the honor ~
Nicole Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 2:49 PM
Dreams can reveal many things about who we are. Thank you for sharing this beautiful dream, these moments from your heart- your childhood. Memories remain, even when that dream is over. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Brandy, thanks for visiting and WOW, I got POTD, what an honor !
Roper Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations for these wonderful poem ... POTD Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, woot! woot! POTD ...
Toney Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your Poem of the Day, Constance! ~Mark
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Mark, thank you so much I am over the moon happy ~
Wanter Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Back to compliment and congratulate!!!
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:40 PM
Sun, THANKS, wow POTD!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Congrats on POTD Constance. I noticed Andrea commented on your Native heritage. I wasn’t aware of this part of your background. I have a number of Soap Stone Carving and Pottery from Algonquin First Nation Artists.
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Richard, thanks for the congratulations, yes I am part Ojibwe, because my grandmother was , she called me Dear Heart as a child, which is Wiiskobi Ode. We have some wonderful First Nation art here in Ottawa at the National Art Gallery of Canada and several interesting shops here and there.
Sands Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:44 PM
Heidi, thank you so much, I am thrilled, almost better than a win in a contest, which I did not get lol!
May Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Dreams take us to many places....Congrats on POTD DH
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:44 PM
Joseph, thank you so much on the congrats ~
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 7:42 AM
This one moved me; from my own childhood imaginary steed (black too, but with wings) to our heartbreaking history. Lovely done Constance, congratulations on POTD <3 xomo
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Maureen, thanks for the nice comment and congrats on POTD, good to know I was not the only girl who had an imaginary black horse!
Warrior Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 7:30 AM
My dear friend, Constance...you are an incredible poetess with great talent...we are proud to have you on the Soup...Congrats!!! on having this honor of POTD!...very well-crafted verse...^WW^...{*J*}
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:47 PM
John, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats, wow POTD, who knew this would happen !
Pandit Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Back with congrats on a well deserved poem of the day, Dear Heart.
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Vijay, thanks I am just thrilled !
Gondolf Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 4:58 AM
Congrats on POTD, Wiishkobi Ode, a very noble dream for the young warrior princess. John
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:50 PM
John, thanks for the congrats and for using my Ojibwe name !
Kitchin Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 4:44 AM
Constance, congratulations on POTD with this wonderful tribute poem!
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Tania, thanks so much, I do not get many POTD so I am very happy !
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 1:57 AM
Some dreams you never forget and this one would certainly stay with you. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. Tom.
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Tom, thanks so much for the congrats on my POTD, I could not imagine when I wrote this poem it would be so honored.
Kiser Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Sad fact but, you've penned a wonderful tribute to a great people. There is never any excuse for such events.
La France Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 7:39 PM
ML, thanks for the visit and compliment ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 4:04 PM
The harsh unforgivable treatment to Native Americans is an open wound that government still keeps pouring salt in. I don't know about Canadian laws. Your poem is lovely Constance. I love how you honor your tribe. xxoo
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Connie, thanks for visiting, the treatment of the First Nation people in Canada, is pitiful. Some reservations have no clean water, heat, and homes full of black mold, children are dying to suicide because they see no future, fresh food is overpriced and rotting, I could go on and on ~
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 8:02 PM
Great work, Dear Heart. You really get inspired well by your heritage. I hope you do well in the contest. I have only appeared on his recent winner list with an HM since he started his new contest style.
La France Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Well Andrea, I did not place in Brian's contest as we expected but I got POTD , which is even more amazing and more meaningful for me! Miigwech Gichi-Manidoo (Thanks Great Spirit)!
La France Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 11:10 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, me too, since the change with Brian's judging it is just not the same, and I find that very sad ~
Wanter Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 6:35 PM
OH, DH, I hope that ending doesn't stay that way. If only the powers that be would read your dream....
La France Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 11:12 PM
Sun, thanks for visiting and commenting, sadly Canada is being effected by climate change 2 x's faster than any place in the world.
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