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My Honeymoon Vacation

Vacation Contest Sponsor: Lin Lane The sweet fragrance of tall palms swaying in the breeze, brought continuous harmony into our hearts, The smell of contentment spread as far as the eye can see, This was our anticipated honeymoon, we were never apart. We had been through way too much as a young adults. Our vows were made and we stepped off the plane quickly entering a world of tranquility and peace. Kauai was our paradise. This was our destination far away from the life we left behind. It was on the other side of the world. Our honeymoon was anticipated for months, and we were finally there. We couldn't unpack fast enough, for all we wanted to do was dip our toes in the soft sands of the Pacific ocean. It had streaks of cerulean and light green. I saw beauty in each pebble as the waters floated up amicably. The warm breeze showered a gentle mist through my body. I had never felt that way before. The tides gently flowed up to my knees tickling my legs.... sweet scents of palm trees tender mist sprays through my soul peaceful Kauai On a tour we drove around the massive volcano Mauna Loa. It has a peak reaching almost three miles high.They have been formed over the last seventy million years. To see the eruption of lava was an amazing sight for sore eyes. I witnessed the red flow of the volcano dripping down into a hole to the core of the earth. As we drove up to the cliff, my stomach dropped to the ground. The depth of the Waipoo Falls was entrancing. I was hypnotized feeling a sense of magical desperation longing to fly freely into the blue. I saw such tender beauty in Kauai. We deserved this honeymoon after all we had been through. There we were, on an island created only for love. The intimacy was delicate and our passion for each other drove my mortality crazy. volcano of love together in paradise honeymoon island Believing we can share such a deep desire for a vacation Engulfed into the magic an island can freely give Nature so beautiful, bringing natural elation Watching the warm waters is so seductive. ~Date Written: February 8, 2016~

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Date: 2/21/2016 1:10:00 PM
Beautifully written, Laura Loo. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/21/2016 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...:)-luloo*smiles*
Date: 2/20/2016 3:15:00 PM
Vacations varied/ vacations great all who won are on the winners’ page..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:55:00 AM
Nicely done, Laura. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..I hope to reach the lands you describe someday so I too can experience the wonderment!
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Sam-luloo *smiles*
Date: 2/20/2016 7:16:00 AM
Luloo! just great. You made me recall the Honeymoon place of Phantom, I used to imagine in my dreams after reading the cartoon. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Bobby for your kind words...-luloo *smiles*
Date: 2/20/2016 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on this great placing, Laura. I've been to Kauai, the Garden Isle, and it truly is beautiful. I felt a titch guilty being there on your honeymoon, though. lol Thanks for such a great entry.
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:02:00 AM
Oh wow, so cool you were there too! Most beautiful place in the world! Thank you for my placement in your contest :) -luloo *thanks*
Date: 2/8/2016 4:26:00 PM
You make all this sound terrific, Laura! I do not envy you....what am I saying!...of course I do... I do...I do!! We never had a honeymoon...could not afford one in those days...would not mind going to Kauai, but still can't afford it! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/8/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thank you Paul, we will never be able to go back because it was a very expensive trip. But I'm grateful I was able to go during that time of my life...Thank you (smiles)-luloo
Date: 2/8/2016 3:11:00 PM
Wow LuLoo you made me wish i could jump on a plane and follow in your footsteps:-) hugs jan zz
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Date: 2/8/2016 2:55:00 PM
Magnificently written! I felt like I was there, (ata a discreet distance of course!) Your descriptions are so colorful and real! BRAVO Laura! Best wishes, Keith
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/8/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thank you sweet man :) I'd sure hop on a plane again if I could! Too beautiful to express in words. No pic will ever do it justice. *smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/8/2016 1:30:00 PM
A perfect way to start a life together. A beautiful poem inspired by one of God's magnificent marvels. Good luck, Luloo
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:46:00 PM
Daniel, thank you and yes isn't God's beauty entrancing! :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/8/2016 1:06:00 PM
ohh, lou... such fire and sweetness within your lines... well written piece; i'd like to go there.. good one!..huggs
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Date: 2/8/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Nette!! :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/8/2016 11:54:00 AM
Wonderful vacance, wonderful verse so seductive.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/8/2016 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Ovidiu :)

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