Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

My Hit List For 2023

In twenty twenty- three,                                                                                   no rocking chair for me,                                                                                 I am going biking with a big yellow bee.

 

I am now free,                                                                                                 a trip so the world I can see,                                                                            let's go and try to ski.

 

Cleaning out old things with glee,                                                                making room for boxes of new tea,                                                            brings me freedom by the sea.

 

 Date Written:1/11/2023

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Marikate Kingston February 1, 2023 at 10:21 PM Hear yee, hear yee, I agree. What a positive and uplifting little poem. Age is just a number as they say. I shall put my rocking chair away. Paula Goldsmith February 2, 2023 at 9:36 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write positive and uplifting. That was what I was going for. I have always said, age is just a number. I am only 23. Hahaha.......  Have a blessed day.....................

M. L. Kiser January 12, 2023 at 4:17 PM An original write, "I am going biking with a big yellow bee." Love this. Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2023 at 7:18 AM Thanks for your note. If we go for a bike ride, think we can find that big yellow bee??? Want to try??? Glad you love my fun write. Have a blessed day......................

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2023 at 8:50 AM - New year ... ready to try something new ... lovely poem, Paula :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2023 at 1:27 PM Thanks for your note. A New Year with new things to do/see can be fun. Hope it will be a great year for you. Glad you like this one. Hugs... Have a great day..................

Heidi Sands January 12, 2023 at 8:21 AM This is so fun to read. I enjoyed it :) Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2023 at 1:25 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoy my fun write. Have a great day..............

Panagiota Romios January 12, 2023 at 8:19 AM Wonderfullly pristine and positive. Panagiota Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2023 at 1:24 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoy this write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day..............

Andrea Dietrich January 11, 2023 at 8:14 PM I had no idea what theme he meant, but I quite like your interpretation. Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2023 at 1:23 PM Thanks for your note. Many times I do not know what to write. They just come to me. Right or wrong. Guess one can read into something many different things. Glad you like this one. Have a great day..............

Gershon Wolf January 11, 2023 at 7:13 PM Go, girl! Give it everything you've got. But when you need a break, remember my number -- Mr. Stunt Bot Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2023 at 1:20 PM Thanks for your note. 12 day in and I gave it all I can. I now need a vacation. Guess there will be many vacations if I make it to December. Hahaha. Maybe it is time to hit "My Hit List For 2023." Have a great day..............