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My Hit List For 2023

In twenty twenty- three, no rocking chair for me, I am going biking with a big yellow bee. I am now free, a trip so the world I can see, let's go and try to ski. Cleaning out old things with glee, making room for boxes of new tea, brings me freedom by the sea. Date Written:1/11/2023

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 2/1/2023 10:21:00 PM

Hear yee, hear yee, I agree. What a positive and uplifting little poem. Age is just a number as they say. I shall put my rocking chair away.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2023 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write positive and uplifting. That was what I was going for. I have always said, age is just a number. I am only 23. Hahaha....... Have a blessed day.....................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/12/2023 4:17:00 PM

An original write, "I am going biking with a big yellow bee." Love this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2023 7:18:00 AM

Thanks for your note. If we go for a bike ride, think we can find that big yellow bee??? Want to try??? Glad you love my fun write. Have a blessed day......................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2023 8:50:00 AM

- New year ... ready to try something new ... lovely poem, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2023 1:27:00 PM

Thanks for your note. A New Year with new things to do/see can be fun. Hope it will be a great year for you. Glad you like this one. Hugs... Have a great day..................

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/12/2023 8:21:00 AM

This is so fun to read. I enjoyed it :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2023 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoy my fun write. Have a great day..............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/12/2023 8:19:00 AM

Wonderfullly pristine and positive. Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2023 1:24:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoy this write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2023 8:14:00 PM

I had no idea what theme he meant, but I quite like your interpretation.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2023 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Many times I do not know what to write. They just come to me. Right or wrong. Guess one can read into something many different things. Glad you like this one. Have a great day..............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2023 7:13:00 PM

Go, girl! Give it everything you've got. But when you need a break, remember my number -- Mr. Stunt Bot

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2023 1:20:00 PM

Thanks for your note. 12 day in and I gave it all I can. I now need a vacation. Guess there will be many vacations if I make it to December. Hahaha. Maybe it is time to hit "My Hit List For 2023." Have a great day..............