My Hidden Broken Leg

First Part: All I see are my toes!
A constant burning and stinging sensation under this weighted plaster cast has got me bedridden. The cast is made out of plaster and is white in color that is stuffed with gauze  layered tightly with a bandage. This cast covers the severe damage from a fall a week ago that snapped my ankle bone into two like a bitter cold cucumber. I’m staring at this soft but firm cast that is unmoved and unshaken because I’m lying perfectly still waiting for it to heal. The gauze slowly is unraveling from the inside of the cast.  And my toes!

Second Part: Leg Live Life to the Fullest!
Only three living toes peek out 
From beneath the plaster my leg screams to be let out!
“Let me go!” wails my injured leg.  
Sweat slithers out; whilst my leg struggles to stay afoot. 
Waken thee leg and don’t succumb 
Don’t be downtrodden, deaf, and dumb
And leg keep dancing to a new tune 
And keep blessing yourself underneath the midnight moon!

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Date: 5/18/2024 10:30:00 AM
Your poem effectively captures the duality of experiencing physical pain and the hope for recovery. Through vivid imagery, personification, and a shift in tone, it communicates a powerful message about resilience and the human spirit's capacity to overcome suffering. The detailed descriptions in the first part contrast beautifully with the spirited exhortations in the second, making the poem both relatable and inspiring.
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Rukhsana Afridi
Date: 5/18/2024 10:52:00 AM
Thank you. Silent One
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