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2026-02-12 Write A Beautiful Carpe Diem Poem Poetry Contest.

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My Hell In Death Valley

Always prepare for the unexpected, as more often than not the unexpected will happen.
Always have a plan B, even better a plan C.
Quote by Poet.





I was heading into Death Valley to
deliver drums of oil to the research 
station, a trip that I took every month,
our haulage firm called it the 'Hades run'.

The forecast was 129°f for that day,
all was going well when disaster struck,
a front tyre had blown and I swerved off
the road, Blast it I thought It’s all I need.

I reached for the cab radio that crackled 
and then went dead and I cursed my luck.
An hour went by then two, I was beginning 
to panic, no other soul on that lonely road.

Then the air-conditioning packed up and
the temperature rose in the cab and I got
out quick and into the shade under the truck,
and drank the two bottles of water that I had.

Six hours had now passed and I was struggling,
the heat was unbearable and I realised I’d 
probably die.I thought I was dreaming when I 
heard a voice shout, "Hey Buddy you okay there".
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George Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Such unexpected things can happen during travel. To get stranded in a lonely place where the temperature is high, is indeed so sickening. When you reached a point beyond endurance, you were lucky to have got assurance of help.
Cunningham Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Thank you for your return visit Valsa, whenever I venture outI always have a plan B, always prepare for the unexpected. Tom
George Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 8:49 PM
From the torture of hell to the coolness of a cooling oasis... ! Carpe diem! Yes, the unexpected can happen any time and we can't prophesy when a ray of hope shall enter into our darkened sky. As ever, an engrossing story. All the best dear Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 11:09 PM
Thank you Valsa, the unhospitable Death Valley fascinates me, one of the hottest places on earth.we never know when disaster might strike. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 2:49 PM
The Hades run indeed! very clever Tom, you’ve no idea the possibilities this one opens up, you could have taken this down so many different paths, I might actually borrow some ideas (not copy them of course) on how to write a blockbuster poem, it’s brilliant and full of your own poetic storytelling technique, cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 3:40 PM
If anything like the original Dubliners. then I know exactly what a super night you had:)
Cunningham Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 3:24 PM
Thanks David, feel free to use, just back from seeing the Dublin Legends, brilliant night, met them afterwards, really down to earth folks. Tom
Crandall Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 12:25 PM
I enjoyed reading your story about Death Valley. Though I've lived in California my whole life, and I've been to the desert, nearby, I've never been to Death Valley. I hear the wild flowers are quite beautiful in the Spring. I wouldn't want to go there in the summer!
Cunningham Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 1:23 PM
Thank you David. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. It's on my bucket list, I'd go prepared though, a few gallons of water to be safe lol. Tom
Sands Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 6:40 AM
Wow. This story captured me. Great ending . Great writing :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Thank you Heidi, I'm happy that you enjoyed it ,a fictional story but sadly Death Valley has claimed many lives. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 11:12 AM
Dear Tom, You are of the best storytellers here on soup, you always keep us readers on our toes, so hooked from the very beginning till the end, to see whats next! Excellent carpediem, and i must say the flow is seamless and i thought the ending felt more like the character wokeup from a dream. Or something but it sure did give me an idea of the panic and the exhaustion too to some extent there! Brilliance! Your quill is worthy of all the accolades! Pleasure reading! fave it is! Sending u light
Cunningham Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 12:53 PM
Thank you very much IE, I'm happy that you enjoyed it, had a lot of experience when my daughters were young telling them stories of princes and princesses in far away lands, thank you for faving it.hope you're OK and that your week is going well. Tom
Brotherton Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 6:02 PM
A heart thumping tale, my friend. Glad it was just a poem.
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Jerry, glad you enjoyed, it's a fascinating place. NASA often go there to test equipment in high temperatures. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Jones Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Wow! You had me in suspense till the very end! Great story! Good luck in the contest!
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Thank you Karen. I'm happy you enjoyed the story, things don't always go your way always expect the unexpected. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 8:16 AM
Excellent story told by a great storyteller, Tom! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 9:45 AM
Thank you very much Janice, glad you enjoyed it.. Tom
May Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 4:30 AM
A Plan B is always good. Rescue comes just in time. Very nicely penned
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 5:14 AM
Thank you Joseph, I don't venture out into the wilds like I used to but I always went prepared . Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 1:30 AM
Excellent poem on the subject. Wish you luck.
Cunningham Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 2:01 AM
Thank you Victor, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 11:07 AM
Great fiction write- loved it Tom .Happy endings are always good . Hugs Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 1:55 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer, inhospitable places can be unforgiving and you have to be prepared for anything. Hope you've had a lovely weekend. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 7:58 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "My Hell In Death Valley" write/story with a great quote. What a great picture you have here. A wise person always has a B if not a C/D plan really to go. Life happens.... "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a blessed/fun ~ day/week writing away..........
Cunningham Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 8:43 AM
Thanks Paula, would love to visit Death Valley,hottest place on earth, would take plenty of water lol. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
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