''My Hearts, Whispering Bliss''

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Love is my hearts essence, shining,
      Our love is perfect like a dream;
            Walking hand in hand by a stream.

And my heart speaks of love burning,
      The shadows folding around us;
            Our kisses and words like stardust.

Without love, life is not living,
      The love within us is immortal;
            The passion is unchangeable.

Love for us is never fading,
      Slowly, silently, now the moon;
            The dawn dim, that rose far to soon.

I rest in his arms, trembling,
      Words of love falling from my lips;
            Tears from my hearts, whispering bliss.

Love is my hearts essence, shining,
      And my heart speaks of love burning;
            Without love, life is not living,
                   I rest in his arms, trembling.

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August 26, 2012

Poetry/Constanza/"My Hearts, Whispering Bliss"
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/6/2016 1:18:00 AM
Now this is a love poem. That's the great thing about the soup is being able to read and learn from such talented writers. I appreciated your kind visit and I'm even more pleased I read this gem. : )
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:12:00 AM
Mark, thanks for the nice comment and the compliment, appreciate
Date: 1/5/2016 2:29:00 AM
Wow Constance.. love in every stanza deepening.. last line amazingly beautiful!!
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:04:00 AM
Upma, oh thanks for the wow, the amazing and the beautiful !
Date: 1/4/2016 2:20:00 PM
Wow, Broken Wings....This is superb. You caught the essence of love so well in these lines. I do love the Constanza form. I've written in it once. Good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 3:31:00 PM
Eileen thanks for the wow and the superb and the visit ~
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